The Special Two - Comments

omggg can i just say that i hate bella?! SHES SO NEEDY! she can't have edward and jacob! clara and jake belong togetherrrrrrrr! HELLOOOOOOOOOO! hahahah. amazing update girl! :) i hope jake and clara get together soon! :) i miss jake!!!

Oh my God, is Jacob with Bella!?!?!
Can I join her in hurting Daniel or whatever his name is? :3 (sick with a fever, plus I have a crappy memory. XD)

i wonder were Jake is ? i miss that four legged shape shifter . Anyways , when i got my belly button pierced i was like going into cardiac arrest from nervousness. But it actually didnt hurt me at all . the reaction is probally different with different people .

Awesome update :)
think she called one
of the bragg brothers.
Can't wait for the next
update :)

the piercing doesn't hurt that much my boyfriend took me and he made me laugh a lot so that probably helped :)
great update!

Gah! Poor Clara D: Where is she going? O_O
Update soon!

I've always thought they were kind of tacky but hey it's your body. Anyways good update.

Awe, how cool.
I wanna see your piercing.
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i don't have it done but my friends all said it was a 4.
i wouldn't be too worried.
I hope she finds jake and beats him senseless

O just found this story, and I think its amazing! The whole concept is unique ! Wait, just because she isn't meant to be with Daniel, doesn't mean she can't be with Joshua? He seems to be the nicer one out of the two. Why was Jake in their house? :S Please explain? Lol

Another great chapter :)
Bring Jacob back! I miss him :'(
Update soon!
Xx

love the update!

please update this is really good!! :D

omgggg i want jacob!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i wanna see what happens between those twoo imprintees!! haha

This story just keeps getting better! I wonder what her new power is gonna be...
Update soon, but enjoy Cali :)

I LOVE THIS STORY... I WAIT EVERY DAY AND CHECK MY EMAIL FOR AN UPDATE NO LIE

I found this story a few days and have finally caught up on it. Your writing has improved since the first chapter and it is interesting to not only see the changes within the characters but I can clearly see your writing develop and improve. I love how you didn't rush into anything. Sure some people just want to see Jacob and more Jacob and then shirtless Jacob and then making out with Jacob but that isnt life. People fight, shit happens, people get hurt and if someone got hurt by someone else it wouldnt be resolved in a day. Things take time and you show that perfectly and the emotions in your story, although the story is based on something extremely ficitional and from a fantasy land, the reactions and emotions are reasonable and plausable. The only critique I have is with the Alina character, she seems underdevelped for everyone being so scared of her and I know you want to keep some mystery to it but in a way there is so much mystery that I tend to forget who she even is and I put her into the back of my mind in the 'not really important, might need it later though' section of my mind.
Overall this story is wonderful, realistic in a world full of vampires, shapeshifters, and all other mythical creatures and I am looking forward to your next update!

Oohhh , I so agree with Cutie 0.0 Cucumber
I actually kinda of screamed because she didn't get caught .
I was like "YES FINALLY!"
Haha , but this update was awesome , very interesting.
And I laughed hard at "it smelled like knowledge"
And can albinos tan ? Hmmmm
Can't wait for an update !

Omg I love this!:D

Love you for not going cliche and having Jacob see Daniel kiss Clara. That's so dumb.
And it pisses me off.
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