ok so I thought I would comment on both as mine is longer than your one.....I must say I wanted to read the other more than this but this is a good story and is quite interesting. I'm not say I didnt want to read on but I was more intrigued by the first. Your very good at descriptive writing. You make it very clear to picture. All in all your a very good writer :) xx
July 11th, 2011 at 11:37pm