The Consequence - Comments

Up to chapter seventeen and am I the only one whose seriously hating on Zara? I want to eliminate her.

I'm really not ready for this to be over with.
I'm happy she finally got the nerve to break up with Eric...even though she did it on her wedding day.

I'm glad she broke up with Eric, though she should've done it a bit sooner. And I don't want this to be over. Ever.

This story is beyond amazing, but I do wish the Maine boys were in it...

I'm going to agree with Bri. There should've been at least a little fight or something.

I can't believe this whole thing was resolved with no fists involved! Poor baby drunkie, he didn't do anything to deserve what he got.

I'm sad this is almost over but stoked for the ending.

I'm so excited with what is coming.
And can i ask what's going on with Ashley and Halvo?
We're a little in the dark there.

~fallOUT

I'm sad this story is coming to an end. But I love this story so much but you already knew that.
Everyone just needs to get along okay.

Baby drunkie being a baby drunkie and only consuming vodka. Typical. Not much else can be expected of course, but he still plays into his role very well.

I adore this story and this chapter and I don't want it to be over!

I don't like almost all the characters.
I like Brian and Sophie... but Stephen isn't so bad either.
I mean, he was kinda tossed off to the side as Zara's plaything,
so I kinda feel bad for the kid.

But I think I hate everyone else, because they started cheating...
and Ashley's just a bitch and... yeah.

I only like Brian, Sophie and kinda Stephen, that's all.

You're really good, I could never put so many plot lines in one story
without making my head explode.

~fallOUT

I hope that she wakes up and everything gets resolved. Cliffhangers aren't cool.

AAAAAAAAAARRRRGGGGGHHHHHHH

Are there going to ba any happy couples/people left in this story?! I hope everything that's gone to shit is turned around soon, especially with love of my life Stephen. And Evie too I guess, dying is no good. Ugh I love this story even if it makes me depressed. ):

I really hope evie's okay. This is so intense.
And don't be so hard on yourself, darling. This story is excellent (:

Omg, I don't even care that I pretty much am mad at every character in this story. I just love all this drama. It's what I've been waiting for.

justin's a douche and zara is a bitch.
match made in heaven.
and with everything out in the open, it makes me just want to hit everyone and yell, "STOP BEING WHORES." but beggars can't be choosers.
I hope Evie is okay, hopefully everything will be okay.

omfg everything is just crumbling. I'm glad everything is out in the open, even in the awful situation they're in with Evie (WHO I HOPE DOESN'T DIE OMG) I hate Zara SO much honestly. Most of the characters are pretty awful at this point...hoping some things will turn around soon.

this is actually an amazing story
please don't stop writing it! x

wow, i wonder what everyone will say when they find out about evie and logan...
oh well, i still think justin's a douche regardless.
i hope evie's okay.

well, can I just say that I love this story with all my heart?
and I really wanna junkpunch Justin, douche.
Stephen should jump him, or throw stuff at him, that would be cool.
I'm sorry I haven't been commenting, from now on, I will every update.
so be looking forward to that (:
you are an excellent writer as well, so I cannot wait for what you have in store.
and there should be a catfight, that would be grand.
you know, just fist fighting would be awesome :D
okay, I'll shush now.

Evie has to be okay, ok. Godsey is a doucher and Zara sucks and Stephen appears to be single which is good to me.

HEY PEOPLE COMMENT THIS STORY NOW. I hate when people don't comment, pisses me off.