The Consequence - Comments

Evie is a bitch and I do not like her.

I loved the latest chapter. I can't believe she's cheating on Justin though.

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Oh my. There's just a huge web if lies these characters are getting stuck in.
I liked this chapter! Especially Justin and Evie's conversation.
And Justin would totally much rather date Stephen. For sure (:

Shit, what did Evie get herself into? She's definitely in a fuckin' pickle, that's what it is. She's doing the fuckin' dirty with Logan...behind Justin's back...who's her 'loving' boyfriend....and Logan's best friend....

Do I smell trouble?

I love this story SOOO much. Gah. Like, I can't even describe it!!

I'M DYING FROM ALL THE FUCKIN' CUTENESS.

I think I'm slowly but surely fallin' in love with those two. I like Sophie. She's real. She eats a burger like a man; not like a prissy, dainty girl. Hahaha. And I think that was the perfect way to make their first date! Looking out over Scottsdale. I love that. It's so romantic. Sigh.

Brian and Sophie are freaking adorable.
And Garza's pretty cute in this too.
Yes Bri, I did just read your comment. You better love me.

AW BRIAN AND SOPHIE ARE SO CUTE!
AW GARZA IS SO CUTE!
oh I guess Charis is too...JK CHARIS OF COURSE YOU ARE (if you're even gonna read this) I LOVE YOU!

So I don't feel so bad for her. I like Logan more anyways, if you ask me. Haha. However, I don't like any of your main characters--all the girls, at least, as of late. Zara's still hung up on Justin, Evie's I don't even know, and Ashley doesn't love Halvo. It sucks for the guys, y'know. Love this. :)

I love this story so much.
I just can't believe that Logan would try to steal his best friend's girl.

Aack I need more of this!! I want Zara and Stephen to break up still ok

HAHAHA LOGAN OMG

Loved the update, and I think Ashley should break it off with Eric.

Omg Logan. I love him. A lot. If you don't have a girlfriend for him I'm game. Kidding. Sort of. Haha.

Poor Ashley. I feel like things are just going to get more complicated as the story progresses, even if I wish it wouldn't because I can already tell heartbreak's in store for some of your characters. :(

Okay, that was pretty sweet; it made me giggle and melt inside from the cuteness that is Brian Dales. Seriously, Brian is such an adorkable goof, I love it. His rambling was very amusing.

Duh it will all be worth it. <3

Awww, it was really cute. Brian is adorable.

Oh! Andddd Rocket! How did I forget about them!? But anyway, moral of long comment: LOVE this (:

Yeah. I'm pretty much in love with this story. I love all the different plot lines and point of views and how they all intertwine together. Plus, The Summer Set AND My Girl Friday!? Oh, fuck yes. (: