The Consequence - Comments

I thought this was cute. Well, the beginning and so on until the ending. The ending made me mad 'cause I'm thinking this girl needs to stick to one boy--and I still can't get over that it's Justin and Stephen! Haha. They're best friends, and they're hot. Jeez.

Stephen was adorable; how could she even think about Justin?!? Seriously. idek.

Stephen needs to break up with her. I mean what.

And now I really don't like her going after Justin while being with Stephen. Girl needs to maker up her mind.

I kinda feel bad for Evie.
But Logan was in this chapter so it makes things better.

I don't think I like Evie...

OHH SHNAP! I seriously just blurted that out and my sister is looking at me funny. XD

I have a feeling Justin may or may not get in trouble for that slip-up, especially 'cause she just saw Ryan and Logan and they were looking for him. But I dunno. Haha.

It was a short chapter, but damn do I want another update already! :) I can't wait for things to start rolling. *excited*

I am not sure why I have not been getting subscription emails but I caught myself up.

Drama drama drama ia always the best possible thing. Except how dare Justin cheat on Evie with Zara. Bad bad Justin.

SCANDALOUS!

All I'm thinking is whatever happened to the bro code?! Zara was with Justin--and for two years?!?!--, and now she's with Stephen? What? WHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH...WHATTHEHELL?! Like, really? hahaha. That's awful.

'Cause now I feel really bad for Evie, 'cause I really liked her in the first chapter. Haha. Let the games begin, I guess. :) DRAMuhhh.

Loved the update immensely. Update soon again, please!
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WHAAAAAAAAAAT?! How dare anyone cheat on the love of my life! And shame on Justin, too!

Love love love this. :)

Amazing. You managed to put all 3 of my favorite bands into one whole story. haha
I love this so much. Excited, like yeah, for when it starts to pick up.:D I can tell it's goin' be good. :)

By the way, Andrew's last name is Cook, unless you meant to write it like that in your chapter.
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HALVOOOOOOOOO

So incredibly excited for the story to start up. :)

I really, really like this. :)
I like how you jump from different points of view and there's more than one couple. It's very well written.
And what's not to love about a story with TSS and My Girl Friday. :DDDD

Love it. Really excited to see where this is gonna go.
Update soon, yeah?

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YOU SHOULD UPDATE AGAIN KAY? KAY

I agree with Bri about the breakup. But I don't agree with her and Stephen meant to be together. John and I are meant to be together though. But I totally didn't just tell you that.

AND THANK YOU FOR THE LINK AT THE END OF THE CHAPTER :)

PS I GREATLY APPRECIATE THE LINK AT THE END OF THE CHAPTER THANK YOU :) :) :)

Stephen and Zara are going to break up cause we're meant to be obviously...I mean what.

LOVED IT. lovelovelove how you have all the different relationships going on in the same story. :)

oh my goodness. I am loving this.

OMG I LOVED THE SECOND CHAPTER SO MUCH!!!
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!! loveloveLOVE! Taylor on a honeymoon...this whole him being married thing is going to take me some getting used to. Love the idea and where this is hopefully going!

SO SO SO EXCITED FOR THIS STORY
And like Bri said, all my favorite people in one story? How could I resist this. :)