Lights - Comments

i know i've comment on this story loads of times, but i dont care.
i just re-read this, and im still in awe about how amazing this is.
just wanted you to remember that there are people out there who love your stories.
i also noticed you mentioned in some chapters that you have some out-takes.
could i please read them?
thank you, kristiina.

... It's finished. The entire story, over. I just can't believe it. But it was amazing and frankly, the best story I have ever read on Mibba. And I wouldn't be surprised at all if it becomes a best seller, and more famous than "Twilight" or "Harry Potter". Simply incredible story and I absolutely loved the writing style. It's nothing like most stories which is a deffinite plus for me. I really hope you write more stories like this and if you do, you know I'm going to be the first to finish reading and loving them.
Love, Kristiina.

That story was amazing. I really hope you write another one. I loved the ending, in a weird way. I mean I hated the death but I loved it all the same.

So you did kill him in the end. I was kinda hoping you wouldn't, but that would be a massive contradiction on myself because I hate stories where you can guess what's going to happen.
I thouroughly loved the whole story, it's fantastic, as is your writing.
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I've just been reading this entire story and my heart just dropped in the end. You're an amazing writer and this story was just.. wow.

I teared up at the end... :(

I just wanted to let you know that I have pretty much resorted to biting my nails while I wait for the next chapter! I'm more excited than you can imagine.

I don't want this to end soon. Beautiful chapter, I could picture all the imagery perfectly; loved it.
Looking forward to the finale. :D

AHHH!!!!!! what am I supposed to do now???? I can't just sit here. My heart hurts for Brendon and Ryan.
one more??? I'm soo scared!!! happy?

ONE MORE?
AFTER THIS?
Oh Jesus.
It was an amazing chapter, it really was. Your pacing was spot on. Every little detail had me on the edge of my seat.

nononononononononooooooooo!!!!!!!! brendon cant be dead! i am literally crying my eyes out right now! the way you wrote this, simply amazing. that doesn't even begin to satisfy it. this story is just ... beautiful, and perfect. just, wow. i guess thats the best way to describe it. so sorry if it didn't make any sence, im not very good with words.
cant wait for the last chapter, i will definitely buy the book (if i can) and just, congradulations on writing one of the most beautiful stories of all time.
love k

The book looks amazing! I would totally buy it.
As for the story... amazing as ever. I love them. XD

This chapter was cute. The book looks amazing, too. If copes were for sale I know I would get one.

i love this story. simply adore it. the book looks amazing too, so nice job. if this book gets published, i swear to god i will be the first person to buy a copy. thats how amazing this is.
i hope you do well with this book, and any others you may ever write.

That was soo cute. They seem to be doing really well, even Ryan with all of the interaction with others. I love that they still argue about the smallest things. It's endearing.
The book looks amazing!!!! :D!! I hope that it does well. If I see it I'm sure as heck going to get it!! :D!!!

My humblest apologies for not commenting on the last few chapters. I absolutely loved all your updates, there was nothing remotely wrong until the latest chapter: “Thank God/i],” Brendon said, sticking his nose in the air. “I couldn't stand having to stay here for a whole... however many hours until those two get home with you.” There's nothing wrong with the structure, per say, but that you've been unable to complete the italics.

It still appears as though Ryan is timid and unable to even "look up at" Spencer's girlfriend Kayla. I think if Ryan was continuously in this environment you can make him more open to people, but I think for Ryan to be open to other people more you need to send him to a social party and have him being pushed by his friends Brendon and Spencer to talk to more people. Say, perhaps the Christmas Party that could be coming up soon?

This is a really unique idea that is probably overlooked on so many occasions because "gangs" are often toned down and how people perceive them and then use them in their character is often toned down and still no one has a sense of what real gang members do, and I think you have captured that in reality. So much of this story has a "real" sense to it and I don't discriminate against sexuality but you have captured a more heterosexual relationship as well.

Ryan - quiet, non-responsive to the alpha male, Brendon, and does as he's told. Which I think really makes him the more feminine characteristics and while not all gays are flamboyant and gay (happy) as Brendon is most often. In my opinion I don't think this story really has the homosexual vibe anymore but now focusses on Brendon, gang and Ryan's shy personality.

Seeing there is three more chapters (?) to come and then it's finished, and taking in the quality of your chapters, I still don't see how Ryan and Brendon are going to be a couple. There's also the fact that they haven't grown as much as characters should in a story, and while Fiction I think you have strayed a little into fantasy writing with this story.

Nevertheless, it is turning up nicely and I am mighty-filled to the brim with anticipation and excitement to see how Brendon escapes the "gang" members. Also, I would prefer to see more open-ended Ryan not shy Ryan. That makes me unhappy. I also love the book you have created, it looks spontaneous and so much like a book that would capture my attention. I am mighty excited to see what happens next.

3 chapters left. But I love this story so much. Everything better work out.

OMG! 3 CHAPTERS LEFT! im sad now. yet happy too. i really hope brendon and ryan start dating. (im a ryden fanatic) this is simply so amazing and i love it!

Brendon is such a little kid. It's amazing!! I <3!! this!!
hopefully everything will be alright soon. poor Ryan. and Brendon.

Gosh I'm so excited for chapter 16!!!! This was good (: I'm interested to see what goes on between Ryan and Kayla...if anything xD