Lights - Comments

Only three chapters?! D:
I love this story so much! I don't want to see it end. :(
ahh well.
I love love love love love love this, and can't wait to see what happens next.
Please update soon. :)

oh my god I was so scared for like that entire thing. But they are both okay! That's good.
And congrats! Can't wait to see the pics!

This is kind of a random question- but how many chapters will there be in this story?

incredible. that is probably the only word to describe this.

That was sooooo freaking scary!!! I was ready to start jumping up and down and then falling into the corner and ball my eyes out. That was sooo lucky that ryan's neighbor actually came over. AHHH!! SO SCARYY!!!!! poor things.
I don't like Gabe. He's a meanie butt and someone needs to call the cops because poor Brendon shouldn't have to run around for the rest of his life until he gets murdered for defending himself. sooooooooo scared.
congradulations on your book. amazing!!! :D!!

That's great- your book copy and the chapter. It really was amazing. Even though it was long (not that that's a bad thing) I was absolutely sitting on the edge of my seat, soaking in all of the words. That was probably my favorite chapter so far. And now I have two things to be excited for- chapter 15, and those pictures (:
This story really is coming along great. You're an amazing writer and I hope you always want to write, because I'll always want to read it.

One of the most well-written stories I have ever had the pleasure of coming across here on mibba.

Kudos =)

I love this. I love them together. XD They really are perfectly balanced. XD
And I would not mind a long chapter. This is probably my favorite story ever. XD

I loved all of Spencer's snide little comments about Brendon. This chapter was great; it showed how Ryan and Brendon really start to work together.

As for your question, I'm all for the whole thing being posted as one- but it is your story, after all.

The whole thing in one would be fine :D
And this story is easily the best one I've read on mibba. Keep it up (:

"You're so mean to me"
"Only in the nicest way"
-best lines ever!!! I <3 them!!!
and brendon really probably doesn't need any sugar; he's hyper enough without it. It's hilarious.
Kayla is a great addition to the mix; their chemistry together is just priceless.
Ryan is sooo funny.
Brendon doesn't know when to shut up and Ryan doesn't know when to start talking!!! even better. because it's soo ridiculously true. XD!!!
I can deal with the short updates because I'm always soo happy when I see that this updates!! :D!

This story is amazing. I love your pacing, your wording; it's almost like I love your comma placement. You have nothing to worry about with your writing.

Oh... my... God!
I think I am literally shocked about how you took this story. This was a turn of events I was not expecting; although it was along the same lines, just not as heavy as that turned out to be. I do wonder though, how he's going to get out of all this business he has gotten himself into. It's really a predicament that I hope Brendon can get out alive, from.

There was just one minor mistake at the beginning, but other than that you did absolutely fine with your spelling, and it really was just a case of mistaken grammar - When Ryan awakened the next morning, Brendon was sitting in front of him with a grin on his face. It would sound much better, in my opinion, with awoke the next morning... But it is your call - and your story.

It is a lovely change of pace to read something so long, and not short, half a page read. I don't see why you were so nervous, sweetheart; it was a lovely chapter, with a lot of potential for unthinkable events to occur. Maybe some more comfort from Ryan (and more love from him -nudge nudge-), more dark secrets, or maybe Ryan will open up more about his own past life. I got it to admit the story is centering around Brendon a little too much though, Ryan hasn't had any (motivational) changes since Brendon tried to take him out to party and he hasn't changed much since then.

Anyways, welcome back and I hope your updates come a little more frequently, this is a lovely story and honestly my eyes just lit up like a thousand lights. Ha ha. I hope you write more soon, even if it is a short update, I'm sure we'll manage.

you know, I can honestly say this is the best Ryden/Rydon story I've ever read. And trust me, I have read ALOT.
Keep up the good work!

Why were you nervous?
It was great. And a good explanation to as of why Brendon is secretive. I wasn't expecting it at all. (:

Brendon really doesn't seem the type to have that huge of a temper. Poor thing.
I MISSED YOU AND THIS STORY!!!!!
soooo happy that it's up. :D!!
I really hope that everything turns out all right, because poor Brendon was only defending himself. :( (and going slightly overboard, but still.) I love how understanding Ryan was of the entire situation.
Poor things. hope it all turns out well.

Your story is beautiful- the premise, the execution, all of it is great :)

): I cried. Now I'm disappointed. KISSING. KISSING SO REALISTIC I FEEL IT ON MY LIPS. D:

YAY!!!! they finally kissed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love them!! and I hope that Ryan figures everything out quickly!!!
Great chapter!!!!!!!!!! <3!!!! more soon???? please??? :)

This story is so well written, i absolutely adore it.