One Heart - Comments

You can hide behind your shield. That's fine. I do that quite a lot with my stories too. But that just means your write really well...which you do. I'm super glad you decided to post this story. If you hadn't and had just left it at the ending for the other one, I'd be close to dead :)

As for this chapter...ah fate. It can be such a nasty little thing at times. lol. I hope that Brian wises up to the fact that it is the real Nat and that the little "monster" is his daughter. He can't be that slow, now can he? haha! Wait, he's a guy...I won't put it past him now actually. He may be extremely drool-worthy among many other things, but 'guy' trumps all in common sense department. Haha! Can't wait for more! Update soon please!

I so wish I could answer all your questions but I'm just going to have to hide behind my 'wait and see' shield unfortunately :P

I appreciate everyone's comments though, makes me feel better at the fact I did decide to post this story.

amazingly awesome please update soon =]

Aw! Jimmy's so nice to her. I seriously like 'aw'ed at that last scene. I can't imagine what Nat is going through right now. But you know, maybe Jimmy's suggestion wasn't such a bad idea. I mean, Brian will understand, won't he? If not shouldn't he be thrilled that he has a daughter (well after he gets over the shock)? Guess I'll just have to wait to find out. At least she's back home in Huntington Beach now. Update soon!

This is so sad :'(
But i LOVE it
By some miracle let Nat live cuz then it's going to be just plain depressing if she leaves...
And Jimmy is so sweet :)

I love It!
But you made Me Cry!!!
And if Nat doesn't Survive this
i'll seriously hunt you down!
lol
Im serious!
x

And by anything you mean Nat can live?? Yes?? If she does I will figure out some way to like get you a7x cookies or something through the computer. haha!! Jimmy's a total sweetheart. I just love him. He makes me laugh and go 'aw' all in the same chapter. But Brian's still my fave so I hope he's not like some huge jerk when he first sees Nat again. I would not be happy with him.

And oh yes...Brian as a magician would be quite....um, interesting I guess. :P Wonder what he'd pull out of his hat. :)

totally fantabulous caint wait for more!!!!

I'm sorry, I didn't set myself out to make anyone sad... although I will say anything can happen in a story, so assumptions made now might not play out as you think they will later :)

Although thinking of Brian as magic conjured up an image of him as playing a magician for some reason... I might have to try to think something up to add into this story to use it.

Holy crap! So you're gonna make it a sad one. Ugh, if you're determined to make me cry I think you just might succeed. You had me hooked on Nathalie and Brian in the previous story and now that she's going back to Huntington Beach to tell Brian about his daughter and her impeding death...it just makes me want to cry. I can't wait to see what happens in all of this. She can still have a miracle right? please please oh please let her have a miracle. Brian's magic, right? :)

OMJ THANK YOU SOOO MUCH!!!!!
Love it can`t wait for more

I LOVE IT!!!!

great update. keep up the good work

So sad:(
But I loved it!

Thanks for posting a sequel!
I can already tell that this is going to be exciting!
update =)

i oficially LOVE YOU!

Yay! Loved it!

amazing new chapter update soon!!!!
YESSSS COMMENT VIRGINITY IS MINE!!!!!!!!!