One Heart - Comments

You know ever since she went to the doctors
I have cried every chapter
I love this story so much

They had to fix the past mistakes at some point :)

It's kind of like a mid-story finale, but you don't have to wait any length of time for the next 'season' to start again. And I've never seen A Walk To Remember- I'll have to think about watching it at some point.

this is sooooo fantastic i hope that you update soon

That was such a cute ending. It reminded me a lot of "A Walk to Remember" but still very cute. Thunderous applause to you

i dont know whether to be happy or sad for them!?

AWW!! That was sooo sweet! I loved the proposal and my heart nearly broke when she said no but Brian being the romantic he is used her own words against her. She is definitely a butterfly. I'm so happy he proposed. :D You're saying is definitely true. Its a little sad, but true nonetheless. Glad things are finally working out for them. Oh but the guys are funny too. I'm glad everyone could be there with them when Brian proposed. Was it planned?? haha! Can't wait for the next chapter but I'll have to wait a week to read it. :( Going on spring break to Canada. Be on the lookout for my comments when I get back! I'll flood you with them. haha! No seriously, I will. :) Loved it!

loving it =)

Oh. my. gosh. Yes that was the revelation I was waiting for but dear lord I wasn't ready for it. haha, does that even make sense? :P I mean like I knew Brian had to find out eventually but like that? Wow. I just didn't see it coming. I feel better now that he knows cuz you know he can work his miracle now :) He's magic remember? :D Aw, I'm seriously tearing up here. Nat can't die!!! I don't want her to! Nat's explanation with the butterfly was beautiful. She is definitely a butterfly but she'll be the one to live longer than 24 hours; she'll live longer than anyone ever expected. She's the special one. Lastly, can I just say that your banner gives me hope that her and Brian do get back together. I'm holding on to that right now to keep me from losing it completely. This was such a sad sad chapter. *sigh* It was just simply beautiful. Way to go. You're amazing. Keep it up and update soon. :)

her monologue was so sweet *coos*

Another great chapter! You never fail to amaze me :) I don't know what to think of Brian's attitude. Like why is he all down now? Am I missing something? (Highly possible...lol!) Its good that Chloe isn't showing how hurt she is that Nat has a kid when she didn't even want one and she does but miscarries. But I love how Zacky knows what's wrong with her. Like he can sense it and everything. That's so cute. I'm glad that the girls accepted Rae, but honestly..who wouldn't? The girl's an angel and cute as a button. Hellllooo....look at her parents. Enough said :) Can't wait to see Nat and Brian get back together cuz you know Rae's birthday wish has to come true :D

Have fun on your outing tomorrow!! I'll be on the lookout for the updates, but when aren't I...haha!! Love it!! :)

cool update soon

Best friends are the best. And I KNEW Brian had to have a reason for missing Rae's party. He just didn't seem like the kind of guy to blow off his daughter after finding out he had one. Plus he and Rae were so close already. I just love that they get along. Him, Nat, and Rae make the perfect little family :) (And you better keep it that way, missy! :P)

I feel bad for Chloe and Zacky :( That must've been devastating for them. I wish Chloe would go back to Zacky but I understand that she needs time. He still loves her and I think she knows that. She just has to accept the fact that the miscarriage was no one's fault and that they can have another one. I just wanted to hug Zacky cuz he looked soo upset. :(

I'm glad that Nat told Brian he is always welcome at her house. That's a big step and I know she probably validates it with Rae, but she wants it too. She may be stubborn but she does need his help and she'll see it in time.

Can't wait for the next update! Oh and I did hear that Wicked was great. I never got to see it when it was in my area last year :( but I liked the books. Glad you had a great time!

it was REALLY interesting!!!! update soon please

Wicked is amazing, definitely the best musical I've seen =D

The person who performed Elphaba (the Wicked Witch) had an amazing voice <3

aw poor chloe and im so glad they reunited!! i hope brian takes her up on her offer and visits Rae and i hope Chloe goes back to Zacky!! update soon! :) OH i WANT to see wicked so bad!

Wow....that sums it up. :) I was stunned by this chapter. I mean I get her nasty words to Brian but he really didn't explain his previous engagement. She assumed he was drunk but that's not necessarily the case. I hope he does explain why he missed Rae's birthday party. I think it would make Nat feel better (and also a little foolish to have assumed what she did). I honestly don't know who to feel more sorry for...Nat or Brian. I feel bad for both of them. :( Now that ending...that was a shocker. Chloe hit her? Wow. I think Chloe will be shocked to find out she hit Nat since she didn't know that she was back in town. Will they find out Nat's illness with her hurt leg and all?? Oh or maybe Brian will move in with her to help out with Rae since Nat won't be as mobile with her hurt leg :) Wishful thinking I know, but hey, he still loves her and love conquers all :) Nat can't deny him staying over to watch Rae. She is his daughter afterall. Anywho...can't wait for the next chapter!! :)

Oh and my confusion is gone. :) You cleared it up loverly :D Thank you for keeping this story going!!

perfect cant wait for more sooooo please dont make me lol =)

oh wow that was ironic! first Brian hits her with his car then Chloe! LoL maybe they will actually talk now!?! update soon!! :)

- Brian didn't know at the time (in the last chapter) that it was Nat getting the tattoo done, he just thought it was some random girl he was talking to. Nat stole a glance at Brian when he first walked in without him noticing, so she knew who it was, so that's why at the end she says it is his star and that the owner has the same name as him.

- As for the whole seeing Nat naked thing that is true, but he hasn't really seen it as she got it in the four years they were apart in Phoenix, and they haven't slept together since then. Of course he would have got glimpses of it when she was wearing a bikini but at the time he walked into the shop it would be half done, so most of the stars would look different, so he wouldn't instantly assume think it is Nat. Stars are quite a common tattoo, so it wouldn't be unusual to see someone with a similar hair style to Nat (since he never sees the face) get the same, so that's another addition to the whole 'not realising it is Nat' thing.

Sorry I confused you guys; hope that clears it all up (along with this new chapter) :)

I'm sorry I've confused all you guys, but I promise I'll answer all the questions after I post the next chapter. I just can't really answer without giving away what's in the next one.

As for Rae having a star she doesn't need one because she has her own tattoo on Nat's wrist (her name surrounded by swirls/stars).