These Words Are Choking Me Slowly - Comments

I finally got around to reading this story. Why didn't I read it sooner I ask myself! Why? Every chapter I get excited because you're slowly telling more and more as to what happened two years ago. I just noticed you say two years ago a lot!

Now you have me pulling my hair out. I want that next chapter!

Well, maybe you could return the love and read a story or two of mine :).

Update soon please!

-Captain Epic of the MCRmy

Yea I'm really late about reading it becuz i dnt really respond to people writing on my page like that, but this is a really good story, that gots me hooked. subscribed.

Did you update and delete it or something...because I swear I remember reading this chapter before. XD

Oh, well. I still love the story ^^

update soon? I like it.

awwwww more updates pweassse

Thats really good!!!!!!!!!! Comment on mine!!!! Tell me what u like about it and wat u dont like and all that!!!
http://stories.mibba.com/read/308006/All-Lies/

I like that girl, she's funny. & i really like this story.
i also luved that part in ch. 2 when she says, "And for your information, I smell like peach blossoms and cherries, you jerk!" that waz hilarious!

wow, this is a really good book, your a better writer than me. i've only been writing for a couple of years. realllllyy good :)

Hello, I got one of your random comments, and based on the other ones you do that alot. That's a good way to get around. :)

About the story I like it I think it's a really good story line and i like Daniel he seems cool. And Erin slightly reminds me of myself lol. But the only thing I would suggest is that the whole scram thing be screamed and that you stop putting the whole TWO YEAR thing out there I mean it's a good way to get the time line across but its also good to say it in other ways like a long time or a really long period of time, you know mix it up.

other than that I think it's good and I am going to subscribe :)

Jadakiss*

i like it its really good.

got your random comment. I'm going to PM you the feedback.

I like it. :)
A lot.
I'm subscribing.

You got readers *robot voice*

Anyway, i love it, I'm subscribing. Return the favor read some of mine

I am loving this story!!!

And i'm very curious as to what happened between Liam and Rayne??

She mentions a he when he's trying to apologise she says 'he wouldn't be-'

Could someone of got hurt or died because of Liam and Rayne or is she mad at him because they went out and he hurt her and broke up with her or something??

These are the questions that are currently stuck in my head!!

So write more and give me some answers girl!!

Oh and by the way you are an awesome author!!!

Much Love
-Claire :)

ooh tis quite fun :) i like Liam hahaha

I like the title and I love the plot, so I'm going to subscribe. Thanks for the random comment

Ooh, I really like it so far. I'm loving Raynie (: I'm glad you posted yer random comment.

hello random commenter I've read this and so far I like it. Keep it up! ^_^

this story is great! I love it so far. I can't wait to read what happens next. I definitely subscribed! good work!

Love it! :)
Ooh... Rayne missed-ahem- MISSES Liam ^_^
PLease update quickly, because I wanna know what happens!
Desperately!