Gold, Guns, Girls - Comments

That was not a lame chapter. (: I actually liked it.

You know, if gives Topher and Cameron more tension, I can feel a fight with them coming along soon, maybe?

I'll admit, a bitch Heather would definitely make for a more dramatic plot, but it's so nice to finally read a story where the main character's crush's girlfriend (wow, tongue teaser) actually is truly sweet. The bitch girlfriend gets old after a while. Or, in my opinion anyway. Either way, satellite mind., I really enjoy reading this story, if not for the plot, simply for the way you write :is such a nerd: Keep updating!

(Speaking of updates, did I just detect a sliver of jealousy in Cameron?) :o

Ah, you did update! This is exciting :D
Hmmm... Heather. She confuses me. I would like to think that she's just that nice and cool, but I would also like to think that she's just that much of a bitch and is planning something (you know, of the sake of dramatic chapters).
Argh, confusion. Hate it.
Loved the update though(:

I love this story!
I think heather is a bitch and can't help to feel like she's plotting something evil.

I think Heather should be a bitch. She should be plotting something. yeah. (:

Have you forgotten about your lovely story? ):
haha
Weeeell, you haven't updated in a bit... So I thought I might try and encourage you some.
I FREAKING LOVE THIS STORY.
Topher is cute, love the kid. Cameron is a dick... Yeah. Heather seems kind of cool. And Olivia, of course, is the coolest main character since... The other coolest main characters.
Whoot ;D

Update soon please!

WRITE MORE. :P
Haha. (;
But for real, this is seriously so good. :D

Uh Oh, Heather's got something up her sleeve.
I'm excited to see what happens

you're writing makes me wish I was one of the characters. chills and gooseboomps, I'm telling you. bravo!

I'm glad you fixed your computer too.
& Topher gives me chills :)

great chapter!
i've missed this story!!!
update soon please!

Topher is awesome. I love him and I hope Cameron doesn't ruin it. lol I'm excited to know how the shopping trip is going to go with Heather, somehow I have the idea that Heather will buy Olivia clothing that's a bit more... Heather-like and some surprises will come out of it. haha I hope you do well on your essay though and I bet I'm not the only one that's grateful that you procrastinated with your essay to post this chapter. =)

UPDAAATE GUUURL! :)
love this story so much.
i read all the chapters in one sitting. (L)

I love this so much. :D
Please update soon? (:

Great story. I have to be quick because I'm meant to be doing homework, so I just thought I'd say that I subscribed and it's awesome. Keep it up :)

I really enjoyed this. c:

And Cam's back to being sweet. Bipolar much?
I have a love hate love love relationship with him
Me and always loving the assholes

LOVE this story :D
Topher is freaking adorable, Cameron is a bit of an ass, and Olivia seems awesome.
Subscribing, can't wait to see what you come up with next (: <3

Aww, Cameron was actually kinda sweet in this chapter (:
I'm still on Topher's side, though.