love it so far. i came back because i forgot to subscribe and when i did i saw an update! haha. I love it so far :) the old layout was that bad... i liked the old banner a lot, it was cute. though i do know what you mean about green and organge. at least it wasnt green and red! wow, im random and lame... anyways, i love how you described him and his rants and gave this mature, non-cliche quality to the concest where the female character is upset that her male best friend is going on a date with some other girl. its a familiar plot, but iknow it wont be - in a good way - the way you write it! &&in reference to your reply to my last comment. yeah, im stupid. but Amelia! Grr, come on! hahaha
I love this already. Very detailed and exciting. I can only imagine where this is going to go. I want to meet this girl he's going out with. We'll see if I approve of her. >:/ ;)
I love this already. Very detailed and exciting. I can only imagine where this is going to go. I want to meet this girl he's going out with. We'll see if I approve of her. >:/ ;)
I love this already. Very detailed and exciting. I can only imagine where this is going to go. I want to meet this girl he's going out with. We'll see if I approve of her. >:/ ;)
awwwww. that was sweet. im loving the writing style. its...intruiging. very different from all youre other stuff. In a good way :) your showing your versatility as a writer. I cant' wait to read more :)
Ehhh, you don't need to rewrite this. It's perfect, as always! I read your author note on Sparkle Baby Shine, &&of course that's all right. I just got reported too and I always thought it was ridiculous but now I know how annoying and aggrivating it can be! I definitely won't report you, author's note are important sometimes even if they come without story content!
You've got some serious talent, no doubt.
Can't wait 'til the next update!