Gold, Guns, Girls - Comments

  • WhoaaLibby

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    Amazing :]
    You've got some serious talent, no doubt.
    Can't wait 'til the next update!
    February 7th, 2010 at 12:06am
  • harlequin. girl.

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    I suck at comments, you're probably aware of that by now. However, this was great :)
    &&yes, I would like to see them up close.
    February 6th, 2010 at 11:49pm
  • a subtle mistake

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    I'm really excited for this story to take off. It sounds amazing, keep up the great writing, doll, you've got quite a knack.
    February 4th, 2010 at 06:46am
  • harlequin. girl.

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    love it so far. i came back because i forgot to subscribe and when i did i saw an update! haha.
    I love it so far :)
    the old layout was that bad... i liked the old banner a lot, it was cute. though i do know what you mean about green and organge. at least it wasnt green and red! wow, im random and lame...
    anyways, i love how you described him and his rants and gave this mature, non-cliche quality to the concest where the female character is upset that her male best friend is going on a date with some other girl. its a familiar plot, but iknow it wont be - in a good way - the way you write it!
    &&in reference to your reply to my last comment. yeah, im stupid. but Amelia! Grr, come on! hahaha
    February 2nd, 2010 at 10:19pm
  • daely

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    Really great so far! I'm excited fr what's to come.
    February 2nd, 2010 at 07:15pm
  • fixedatzero

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    Sorry about that triple post.
    Computer's being stupid!
    February 2nd, 2010 at 04:38am
  • fixedatzero

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    I love this already.
    Very detailed and exciting.
    I can only imagine where this is going to go.
    I want to meet this girl he's going out with. We'll see if I approve of her. >:/
    ;)
    February 2nd, 2010 at 04:16am
  • fixedatzero

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    I love this already.
    Very detailed and exciting.
    I can only imagine where this is going to go.
    I want to meet this girl he's going out with. We'll see if I approve of her. >:/
    ;)
    February 2nd, 2010 at 04:16am
  • fixedatzero

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    I love this already.
    Very detailed and exciting.
    I can only imagine where this is going to go.
    I want to meet this girl he's going out with. We'll see if I approve of her. >:/
    ;)
    February 2nd, 2010 at 04:16am
  • WhoaaLibby

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    This story is going to be amazing. (:
    I'm really feeling it. haha.
    If you don't mind me asking, is this taking place in present time?
    February 1st, 2010 at 10:32pm
  • sukisumi4ever

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    awwwww. that was sweet. im loving the writing style. its...intruiging. very different from all youre other stuff. In a good way :) your showing your versatility as a writer. I cant' wait to read more :)
    February 1st, 2010 at 09:57pm
  • harlequin. girl.

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    Ehhh, you don't need to rewrite this. It's perfect, as always!
    I read your author note on Sparkle Baby Shine, &&of course that's all right. I just got reported too and I always thought it was ridiculous but now I know how annoying and aggrivating it can be! I definitely won't report you, author's note are important sometimes even if they come without story content!
    January 31st, 2010 at 06:15pm
  • Paige.

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    I love it so far. :) And I actually like the layout. I think it fits.
    January 31st, 2010 at 04:08pm
  • Serendipity

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    Aww cute <3
    Can't wait t see what's going to happen :)
    January 31st, 2010 at 02:33pm
  • SpinningInCircles

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    I like this a lot so far, please keep it going :)
    January 31st, 2010 at 04:32am