Gold, Guns, Girls - Comments

this is sooo gooooood! :)

Good. God. Cameron is a horny little bugger, isn't he? Not that that's a bad thing....haha.
I forsee his eagerness to "steal Olivia's innocence" is just going to be bad.
This was amazing. I am absolutely in love with this story.

AH What is Cameron up to now? That boy.
Now that Olivia is with Topher he just has to finally see her for the amazing, gorgeous girl she is.
I love it :D I smell dramaaa.
The chapter was amazing, can't wait to see the next. You're such a great writer(:

I loved this chapter :) I did, however, see a few mistakes in like the last few chapters where it was supposed to say 'her' but it really said 'his'... other than that, it was really great! I enjoy reading your writing style. I can't wait for another update.

cute outfit!
Bad Cameron. loving tropher :)
updates=love

cute outfit!
Bad Cameron. loving tropher :)
updates=love

Your story is so cute =). I love how you made Olivia and Topher's relationship so cute an innocent as opposed to Cam and Heather's sexual one. It really makes the story so exciting. I really like how you didn't do the cliche thing and make either Heather or Topher a bitch so they would break up. It's so original and I love it! Keep up the amazing work and I can't wait until your next update.

I am SO in love with this. :(

hello. :D
since i started reading this story, i got hooked.
and this new update just got me even more hooked!
you're an awesome writer. :]
keep up the good work and i can't wait until your next update!

Update soon please!

I just wanted to let you know that I love this story.

Topher is so sweet! He's cute, and nice, and cute, and... I agree with spazz, totally Team Topher ;D Cameron is still okay in my book though. Annoyed for what he did last chapter, but I like that he's finally really seeing Olivia. Maybe not at the best time, but it's still nice.

Love this story so much :D

I gotta say, I'm definitely team Topher.

THAT'S SOOO CUTE!
I'm in love with Tropher too!!!!
Update soon please :)

all i can really say is wow.
this story is incredible and i really, really, honestly love it, haha.
i cannot wait until your next update.
keep up the awesome work! :]

i see cameron as hot guy who i want to make out with
i see topher as a guy i would want to spend a lot of time with
who will she choose? hmmm
update soon:)

I LOVE topher so much :D
theres just something so calm and sweet about him.
and i love cameron too, but i'm still kind annoyed at him for what he did in the last chapter.

loved the update :)

Cameron is SUCH a douche! It's kinda cool though. Topher should beat him up.
Juuuuust kidding :D Kinda. But okay.
Awe, Olivia is all confused and naïve-like ):
Once again, I loved the update. Not lame at all.

Oh and her outfit was so cute! Love it when stories inspire me to go buy cute skirts.

OKAY, TOPHER SHOULD JUST KILL CAMERON, :|
I'm sorry, I love Cameron but he's such a prick.
-.-
I sense a fight coming onnnn
You're amazingly talented, jsyk.
:}

yay! you updated :D
i loved the tension between cameron and topher in this chapter

keep updating :)