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  • Jessica;

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    3 days is forever?
    You exaggerate!
    You update your stories faster than anyone I know.
    Anyways, yeah Sawyer's going to be begging.
    More soon. <3
    April 4th, 2010 at 06:52am
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    I feel so bad because I haven't commented on anyone's stories lately. Want to tell you that I love this story. I can't wait for the next update, makes me excited.
    April 4th, 2010 at 06:30am
  • kristinaoshea

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    Aw, they have another one on the way?? Burish as a dad is just as hot as Sexy Sharp himself =]

    Sawyer sat in her office, her mind going to her brief meeting with Patrick. She wasn’t sure how exactly she was feeling at the moment. Part of her felt bad for jumping to conclusions about why he was there.
    As she should. She's obviously been dropped on the head one too many times as a baby. Who in the hell would run away from Patrick Sharp? Hell, he turns all women straight.

    Just think about those large hands of his, those broad shoulders, that sex hair of his,” she smirked.
    Oh I'm thinking about it alright =]

    And, I love how you think a week is forever....especially in comparison to me =]
    April 4th, 2010 at 05:02am
  • alyssa-anne

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    Ugh, Sawyer pisses me off. I don't know why Patrick's even attracted to her. She's rude, she thinks she better than everyone, she's antisocial. I mean, no one throws themselves into work that much. Jeesh. She needs an attitude adjustment, honestly. She's a bitch. Patrick should mack on Camryn instead. Just saying. Hahahaha.
    That being said, though, I love Patrick's persistence. And I hope he can change Sawyer's mind, since she's the one he wants. And I hope Adam and Raylene (is that her name? Lmao) and their little Lucy get through everything just fine!
    More soon! <3
    April 4th, 2010 at 04:50am
  • Renee Says;

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    Poor Lucy.
    I hope she gets better.
    And Sawyer better call him. I have a feeling she will.
    I mean who can resist Mr.Sharp himself. :)
    More soon Erin!

    Oh I hope you did good on your exams! :)
    April 4th, 2010 at 04:11am
  • MrsPatrickKane88

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    loved it!! i hope nothing bad happens to burish's daughter :P seeing burish as a father is sooo cute.
    sharp is such a jerk but, i love it =)
    April 4th, 2010 at 04:09am
  • shopaholic

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    yay update!! i love this story so keep it going :)
    April 4th, 2010 at 04:07am
  • Rylie_

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    I have a feeling Sawyer is going to have a hand in making little Lucy better.

    Can't wait for more :)
    April 2nd, 2010 at 05:33am
  • MrsPatrickKane88

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    loved it!!! =)
    i didn't remember that she worked at children memorial hospital until u said
    that lol. And i hope nothing bad happens to burish's daughter. :P
    April 1st, 2010 at 06:10am
  • xoxomusic363

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    Dude!!!!!!!!! I knew you were using Raylene from The Last Goodbye :) It will be good to see her again :) Hehe and I believe that this is fate :) Loved the update :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P
    April 1st, 2010 at 05:19am
  • Jessica;

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    Ahhhhh!
    You included Adam & Raylene and they have a kid.
    How precious.
    Yay for Patrick seeing Sawyer again.
    More soon. <3
    April 1st, 2010 at 05:05am
  • alyssa-anne

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    I have a feeling that Sawyer's going to turn around when she sees Sharpie all concerned about his goddaughter. Obviously, Sawyer cares about kids a whole lot and I'm hoping she'll see another side of Patrick instead of just the charming, bantering, sexpot she's known since they met. I hope Lucy is okay, as well! I can't wait for more! <3
    April 1st, 2010 at 03:56am
  • mully17

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    WHATTTTTTT Raylene and Adam ended up together ok that made me happy but sad that the little one is sick
    April 1st, 2010 at 03:52am
  • kristinaoshea

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    I'm caught up now. I wanted to leave you a more meaningful comment, but I have a mental image of Sharp laying in bed and all I can think right now is "yum, sexy Sharp" =]

    Aw, Burish as a daddy?? More of that. You're killing me with this story already (in a good way, of course) =]

    I sense some possibly awkward situations coming up ;)
    April 1st, 2010 at 03:50am
  • A1407719

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    ooooh. the next chapter should be interesting. I wonder if he'll see Sawyer at the hospital?? glad you're updating this so often cause I always want to find out what happens next!
    April 1st, 2010 at 03:40am
  • There She Goes.

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    just read this entire story.
    loved it (:
    i like how she makes a pros and cons list for everything.
    how can someone turn down patrick sharp?
    aww, hope adam's daughter is okay!
    April 1st, 2010 at 03:37am
  • Devilschick

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    okay so this was nice but i am slightly annoyed with sawyers night and day personality changes... she needs to lighten and just be happy....also when sayer and sharpie eventually see each other in the hospital sawyer needs to be nice to him or not talk about their personal lives in front of adam and his wife and daughter.... i also want the little girl to be okay :)
    April 1st, 2010 at 03:20am
  • kare_bear

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    sawyer needs to get over herself and get down with the sharp ;D
    and i hope that little girl is okay ! <3
    April 1st, 2010 at 03:13am
  • Renee Says;

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    Awh. Poor Adam.. I hope everything goes okay..
    I don't think I could handle another sad story from you.. :p
    And Patrick better be nice when h gets to the hospital..
    Well Sawyer needs to be nice.. :)

    And Ilove how you put Raylene and Adam in this story.
    Adam being a dad is too cute!
    More soon!
    April 1st, 2010 at 03:09am
  • A1407719

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    Patrick seems like such a gentleman, sorta... can't wait for more
    March 30th, 2010 at 08:09am