Don't Speak in Guarantees - Comments

  • MrsPatrickKane88

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    loved it!! i really like this story it's different from other stories on here which i like =) update soon!!!!!
    March 30th, 2010 at 06:11am
  • xoxomusic363

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    Dude. I love how Patrick just totally makes her forget about her lists of pros and cons once he kisses her. Damn, she's so lucky!!! I'm freakishly jealous ;) hehe.......And I love how he says there will be a next time ;) hehe

    Loved it :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P
    March 30th, 2010 at 05:29am
  • alyssa-anne

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    Oh fuck. I spent the first half of the chapter wanting to punch Sawyer in the face for being so annoying, and just when I think I've had it with her, that happens. Good lord, Patrick Sharp. Some of the things he was saying to her, jeeeeeesus. "As you wish," I giggled and thought of the Princess Bride. Love that movie. And when he didn't want her to reciprocate because it was all about her? Daaaamn, isn't that what every woman wants every once in a while?
    Whew, Erin. That was lovely! More soon! <3
    March 30th, 2010 at 03:39am
  • shopaholic

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    oh hot damn this is quickly becoming my favorite story! u need to update soon i love the pace ur updating at so keep it up!
    March 30th, 2010 at 03:35am
  • Devilschick

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    WOAH!!! this was one steamy chapter ;) i totally agree with the jessica and sonya6w sharp is extremely persuasive :P cant wait for more <3
    March 30th, 2010 at 03:31am
  • sonya6w

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    I have to agree with ^^. Sharpie is very persuasive. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
    March 30th, 2010 at 02:38am
  • Jessica;

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    Damn!
    Patrick Sharp is one persuasive man.
    More soon. <3
    March 30th, 2010 at 02:04am
  • Rylie_

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    Holy crap that was hot!! I was not expecting that at all.

    I'm really curious to see why she just shoved all her morals well the sex moral aside.
    March 30th, 2010 at 01:53am
  • StaalinHorses33

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    Really good story so far. I really like it. cant wait for more.
    March 30th, 2010 at 01:39am
  • mully17

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    Wow that was just wow!!! Who knew patrick sharp would be all about pleasuring ! Wow
    March 30th, 2010 at 01:32am
  • kare_bear

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    bwahahaha.
    you spoil me with these updates
    loved this one and can't wait for the next ;D
    March 30th, 2010 at 01:31am
  • Renee Says;

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    L-O-V-E it! :)
    more soon! :)
    I am so wanna be in her place right now..
    March 30th, 2010 at 01:20am
  • skizzle

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    ahahaha...I seriously love Sharpy. Great Update!! =)
    March 30th, 2010 at 01:17am
  • Renee Says;

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    Awhh!
    I don't think any woman wwoul have any kind of cons on a list if it was Patrick Sharp. :)
    Well I wouldn''t.
    More soon! :)
    Amazing update
    March 29th, 2010 at 03:55pm
  • Devilschick

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    loved the 1st part of this sotry almost believed you;)
    love the pro and con list and how he really didnt give her a chance to say no lol!!
    cant wait for the next update <3
    March 29th, 2010 at 05:18am
  • xoxomusic363

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    Haha I love Patrick Sharp. I love how he makes a pros and cons list & practically forcers her to go out with him. Deep, deep, deep down, she is screaming w/joy at the chance to go out with him. I don't see why she would turn him down. He is so damn sexy ;) hehe lol :)

    Love this to pieces already and I can't wait for more!!!!! :) :) :) :) :) :D :D :D :D :D :P :P :P :P :P
    March 29th, 2010 at 04:18am
  • Trish.o

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    bahahaha he had a wet dream about her and woke up with morning wood :P
    hahahah this story is so amazing.
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    March 29th, 2010 at 03:53am
  • sonya6w

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    Sharpie is so...forward. I like it. And man, the first part got me, I thought it was real. I was like "Where did the old Sawyer go?!? The Sawyer who doesn't have sex!". Anyways, I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)
    March 29th, 2010 at 02:16am
  • Kirsten;;

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    You almost had me at the beginning of the chapter, haha, it was...comical. Yeah, comical, I can't wait for the next update and I already love Sawyer to bits.
    March 29th, 2010 at 12:29am
  • Jessica;

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    Oh God.
    They made a pros and cons list...together.
    It's a match made in heaven.
    Can't wait to see how their date goes.
    More soon. <3
    March 29th, 2010 at 12:09am