Wonderland - Comments

I still love this!!!!
I demande updates>:O

FINALLY. Haha it's amazing, and will always be. I totally understand about the laziness and not knowing what to write; I have the same problem. <3 You have so many comments though, so many people love your story, so why keep them waiting? xD

I love Gabe :)) Yayyy updateee! More soooon? :)

lar dee da so exited fer the next chapter :33

I agree, Gabe should be a cat more often. :D William was absolutely wonderful. He has to be my favorite character in the whole story (other than Patrick, of course.) You developed him just perfectly. :) Can't wait to see where this story ends up.

First off; who can resist bandom and Wonderland?! It's such a brilliant idea.
Second; I read all twelve chapters in one sitting so my comment is rather lengthy and jumps around a bit.
Three; This comment is really long. :D

"They'll spew a bunch of nonsense at you, then make out."

XD That line is brilliant. Gerard and Frank being the Tweedles was a great idea. Their banter about who was more irresistable was awesome. And William as the White Rabbit. Oh! And Pete and Patrick as the king and queen--I mean Ace. <3

Gabe is the most perfect Chesire Cat ever. He kinda made my head hurt with all of his illogical talk. XD

It was an odd sight, I don't think I'd ever seen a floating purple cat laugh before. Then again, I don't think I've ever seen a floating purple cat at all.

Neither have I! O: Is this a common experience? XD

Aww, and then Gabe and Ryan sleeping together. :D Cats are good snugglers, though.

Morning makeout. *fans self*

I like Cassadee and Hayley as a pair. I think it fits perfectly. The never-apart thing is kinda cute. :)

But Hayley and words. o.O I am confused. XD This must be how Ryan feels. And oh Gabriel. <3 He's so... dkljf awesome and fantastic and Chesire Cat. And he called Ryan love. :D *slash joy*

No shit Sherlock is my favorite expression ever. :D And I love you for using it in bandom and Wonderland. And of course it's Gerard and Frank bickering like that. XD Nice.

"You really need to learn that this world is not the world you're from. This world is about what you feel, not what you think. The only thing that needs a reason is thought." My head kinda hurts but I also think that you're brilliant.

O.o Makeup staying on after scrubbing? It sounds so pretty, though, I'm jealous. Ryan is too pretty for a boy. >:| Especially with makeup.

In chapter eleven there's this: Gabe never ceased to... i guess the word would be amaze. Should be a capital I, no?

Not as in some metaphorical, philosophical shit, . . . *falls to floor laughing*

D: Don't let him out of Wonderland! fslkdfj NOOOOO. Gabe needs him! *he goes back to Wonderland* :D Yay!

Chapter twelve: "Um... how long have i been out for?" Should be capital I. ;)

Aww. Cat Gabe! <3 This is just so cute.

Well yay! Now I'm caught up and I've been writing this is Word so it's probably 209438203948 pages long. . . :D I hope you like long comments.

But yes. Adorable story. I want Ryan to stay in Wonderland forever. Gabe should be a cat more often. *flails* I love this. *subs* Update soon? :) Oh, and keep up the way you describe. It's not too ridiculously long, it's just right. :D So yeah. I'm done rambling now. XD

Amazing, simply amazing. I love how everything just ties together to the point where you feel comfortable in all the nonsense. The imagery is great, and you do a good job with the flow of the story. I really loved the part where Ryan's make up wasn't messed up, and Gabe explained why.

How odd. His make up and hair is near perfect, even after all of the mishaps that would usually screw it up! Great update! More soon? :)

hurrllo! aww I love the new chapter:) Gerard and Frank are fun to read aboutXD Update soon? :D

Woah!!!!!!!!' effing amazing. It makes me think( thats a first for me LOL ). Keep it up

Wooooooooo!!!!!!! AWESOMENESS, I love you toooo! lol

You, I love. Therefore I'm now going to raid your other stories XD

Godo work!!!!

Yay I love this story so much!!

OMG YOUR NOT DEAD!!!!!!!!! lol I am liking the story!

This story is awesome!!! Queen Patrick...*giggle*. Gabe as the cat...I can totally see that... :)

characters? please? ill bake you a human pie!!!!>:(

Okay, this chapter was kinda filler,. BUT the thing is, is I have tried to sleep with a crazy cat...long story short I have a cat that will make old-lady sounds at you telling you that this is her bed and she's just being nice, and letting you sleep there. She's crazy!!! anyhow good update!

Awesome! I WAS RIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOO! QUEEN PATRICK! lol... sorry for being belated. I haven't been on in a while :/

only one mistake that you forgot. ypu forgot to put the next chapter in D:<

i love gabe in this! hes so odd

LOVE IT and all of the DecayDance record mates in it!!! I love the Petrick in it too!!! ALWAYS!!!