Goodbye to Romance - Comments

this story is so cool!
can't wait for more!

THIRTY?!?! I will sooooo comment thirty times if i I have to which I hope I don't people should comment on how awesome this story is just because! I cannot wait for more XOXOXO

This is really, really good. Is she like bi-polar or something, cuz first she's all afraid and shy, then she's "feisty"? Hmmm...

Pretty much, this story is amazing. I cannot tell you my favorite part, actually. And I'm sorry.
But the entire thing is my favorite, ;D
Update soon, kay? < 3.

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“Sir, yes, sir!” I shouted and saluted, rolling my eyes when he slammed the door with so much force that the room shook.

This just made me laugh I totally picture her saying that and Matt slamming the door with that force that the room shook and possibly knocking the door right off it's hinges.

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“Slower, slut, I’m enjoying this,” he growled.

For some reason unknown to me but every time he calls slut it just gets to me and I want to fucking slap the hell out of him. Also the fact that he hasn't slept with her or anyone else(that he knows).

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“Your name is Slut.”

Can I please slap him?

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He looked at her with something similar to adoration, as weird as that might sound.

It does sound weird but also quite cute. It's like a code name for her so no one knows that he likes or possibly love her.

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compassionate sex slave owner

Hey a girl can dream I suppose.

I enjoyed the update and the interactions between Matt and Kaedyn. I see a lot of drama that could happen in their future. I will just have to wait and see.

“Sir, yes, sir!” I shouted and saluted
That was the awesomest line ever! lol, I can just immagen Matt's angery expression on his face.

please update soon.

“See,” he said in an arrogant tone, “mine’s trained.”
loved that line
but I have to say
I like jimmys character a lot

I love that whole name thing. That was great.
Update soon?

I just found this story and I love it, please update soon.

(Matt has a soft spot for her, lol)

update soon! I luffs it <3

I didn’t wake up when he climbed two more spiral staircases or when he fumbled with a key to unlock the room he was taking me. I didn’t wake up when he gently set me down on the large bed and I didn’t wake up when he crawled in next to me and pulled my sleeping body against his.

Thats my favourite <3
Matt is so sweet:)

i want a fuckin update so im commenting danmit ;D

Update pretty pretty please!

"stop crying or you'll throw up over everything" is my fav quote and i think it's nice that you've shown his good side, when will he find out that 'j' raped her? em:)

ur welcome love as long as u update i will always comment

hola! Como estas?
lol i love your story! its very entertaining. I can't wait to find out what happens to her. So please, update soon :)

Aw, this is an amazing story so far. Cannot wait for the next update! Love it!

this was written extremely well, i love it :)

i dont know what it is, but your writing style amazes me.

Mattie bein sweet.

i didnt expect matt to be so sweet and caring
cant wait 4 more