hey i really like this story i wrote a simillar one a year ago but got mad when i was editting it lol any who so far so good ive a few matt stories if u wana read
“Chill, guys, I just need to piss.” i love this one cuase i thought it was funny and i would never say it if i was in her sitaution. update soon please
“I was a Boy Scout for twelve years, I know how to untie knots, asshole. Can I pee, please?”
That is really ballsy of her to say when she there as a slave. But kudos for not caring at the fact that they could totally kick her ass. Shoot I would have been asking and doing the same thing if I had to go to the bathroom no questions asked. Though I'm wondering how long exactly is Shadows going to keep her?
'The man with his body pressed to mine grunted and then held his hand out, and murmured, “Condom.”'
I don't really know why put this gets to me. I think it has to do with how ironic it is. He wants to rape her not giving a damn but then remembers 'oh yeah protection'. He probably would still have done it without a condom probably.
I just found this story and I'm really enjoying it.
Well, considering I am a new commenter, and subscriber, I guess I'm entitled to commenting. xD I don't really have a favorite line from the first chapter or the second one because of what happened in both, but I promise that when there's a line that I like, I will put it up in my comment. :) Update soon, please?
It seemed to take hours, as if it would never end, but it did, eventually, and I couldn’t stop crying as he pulled out roughly, laughing and grinning. Jeeeeez. That man has no heart. Sick asshole. Sadly, this shit happens in the world. >_< BUUUUT VBABY loved it as always KBABY. And what's with the whole 15 comments until new post? ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME HERE?! But apart from that, LOVED IT! Post soon. NOW. :)
no favorite parts I like the plot line but how am I supposed to pick a favorite line and not be deemed a pervert. I like dramatic dark stories sue me you know? of course you know since you're writing one. I'm gonna shut up now. Please update. :)
That made me laugh. :)
Great story, and great update. keep it up. :D