July 28th, 2009 at 04:52pm
Wow, that was amazing.
You used "big words" xD, so to speak, and I feel you described everything very well.
I sometimes hate when too much vocabulary is thrown in and it just complicates everything and makes the story drag on; you didn't do that.
Great writing - keep it up!
The ending could not have been better either, and the dialogue was really powerful.
The use of the tape recorder was fantastic too, I would never have thought of using it.
Well done! ;D