Stories from the Back of His Motorcycle - Comments

  • JamieJo

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    I love this story!!!!!
    Its absolutly amazing, your charecters are obviously very thought out, something most writters don't take the time to do, and the story line is very interesting.
    I can't wait for your next update :)
    March 19th, 2010 at 12:52am
  • ArgonXRoses

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    *clap clap clap* YAY!!!
    hee hee

    I don't know why, but this is a great chapter... might have to do with the banner... naaa... : ]
    Detention though? Harsh. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, as always.

    m o r e s o o n p l e a s e
    March 19th, 2010 at 12:03am
  • Lookingback

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    I love this. Update soon ?
    March 17th, 2010 at 04:58pm
  • billygibbons

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    love love love love :D
    March 15th, 2010 at 09:05am
  • ArgonXRoses

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    Yay! He smacked the cash machine-of-death and made it work. That's great! <3
    March 15th, 2010 at 03:21am
  • this_heart_has_bled

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    great story... please update more and update confusion girl
    March 15th, 2010 at 02:17am
  • Dodger

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    I heart Vaugh!
    March 15th, 2010 at 12:36am
  • bookworm85

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    MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! need i say MORE!?
    March 15th, 2010 at 12:22am
  • alexandra.

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    the beautiful alexandra? what, are you my mother now?!
    ahahha i couldn't resist. i had to quote this lovely chapter! Seriously, i do not understand how you're not a published author by now.
    I can honestly say you're in my like, top two writers of mibba. Honestly; you're amazing.

    “Okay, God,” he turned to address the practically fuming business man standing behind him “some employees nowadays are just plain rude. It shouldn’t matter that we’re in the middle of a credit crunch, shops should still have high standards when it comes to employing.”

    ^ that part made me laugh so hard. I could just picture his cocky non-chalant attitude, and it's amazing.

    Every little thing you write is so great. Like, you can picture every little detail. Ugh, so amazing.
    <3
    March 14th, 2010 at 11:29pm
  • alexandra.

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    the beautiful alexandra? what, are you my mother now?!
    ahahha i couldn't resist. i had to quote this lovely chapter! Seriously, i do not understand how you're not a published author by now.
    I can honestly say you're in my like, top two writers of mibba. Honestly; you're amazing.

    “Okay, God,” he turned to address the practically fuming business man standing behind him “some employees nowadays are just plain rude. It shouldn’t matter that we’re in the middle of a credit crunch, shops should still have high standards when it comes to employing.”

    ^ that part made me laugh so hard. I could just picture his cocky non-chalant attitude, and it's amazing.

    Every little thing you write is so great. Like, you can picture every little detail. Ugh, so amazing.
    <3
    March 14th, 2010 at 11:29pm
  • nearly headless.

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    Hello, Vaughn. . .my name's Rebecca, and I think you're sexy.

    Practicing, is all.

    Great story, btw. Fabulous writing and portrayal and all that.
    March 14th, 2010 at 04:36pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    great story so far!
    March 14th, 2010 at 06:44am
  • Grapophobic

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    I love the story!
    March 14th, 2010 at 06:20am
  • alexandra.

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    this story is far too good!
    their dialogue is amazing, and i'm glad you like my choice of vaughn, haha.
    i'm quite excited to see what else happens with this story, missy!
    <3
    March 14th, 2010 at 05:32am
  • wild lavender;

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    I really like! can't wait till more! :)
    March 14th, 2010 at 05:29am
  • ArgonXRoses

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    ^-^ so pretty!... i like it. i like it a lot!!
    Vaughn opened the window for her...*happy sigh*... And he knew her name.. that is funny.
    March 14th, 2010 at 01:21am
  • Emily Alisa

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    Superb. :]
    I can't wait for the next installment.
    March 14th, 2010 at 12:56am
  • Winterhart

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    I love this story. I am so excited to read the next chapter.
    March 13th, 2010 at 11:53pm
  • whoeversheis;

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    This is oddly intriguing. (: another chapter soon would be loved <3
    March 13th, 2010 at 11:36pm
  • alexandra.

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    ugh, i'm already obsessed with vaughn, haha. i really love this story, like, the setting, their dialogue - her hard-headedness, his bad ass-ness, haha. making up words here i think, but i seriously adore this. i think i actually like freaked out when i saw you updated.

    p.s i completely picture vaughn as this guy: http://image.com.com/tv/images/processed/super/b3/6d/266666.jpg i love this.

    <3
    March 13th, 2010 at 06:05am