This story was just perfect. I smiled, I laughed, I cried, a lot! This was a very subtle fanfiction -almost always the best kind- that could very well be an original. I was hooked from the second chapter, and couldn't help but read in one sitting. You have a talent, and I hope you go on to write great stories. I would buy them!
i love this story. omg its amazing. there arent really very many derek stories and if theyre are they are all one shots or are forgotten and never finished but this one is literally one of the best things ive ever read. and ive read it twice. and i plan on reading it again. you are an amazing writer. seriously i wish i had your talent.
I started and finished it today, THAT WAS SO GOOD YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW, i was like crying and then laughing and then heart broken then reborn and oh my goodness, i can't even.
This story was perfect. I loved every up and down of it. You did a great job writing it and im so sad its over but it ended just right. Thank you for writing this.
So, I just started reading this story about a week ago, and like the comment below, I honestly don't know what to do with my life either. I would stay up until the wee hours of the morning, even with school, and read. Some of the chapters would make me smile, while others would make me so mad because they weren't together. But the timing for every event was impeccable. This was such an amazing, well put story and I don't even know where to begin. You put it all together so greatly, and I can only hope that one day I'll be able to write a story as well as this one. I want to congratulate you for coming up with such a simple story line and making it exceedingly entertaining from beginning to end. You are truly my inspiration to continue writing and to persevere every day. So thank you. Thank you so much for this story. Even though it's not even published, it's probably the most detailed and ravishing story I've ever read.
I look forward to reading more of your future stories.
I have no idea what to do with my life now. The past six days, I've been checking my subscriptions and my e-mail numerous times throughout the day, both anticipating, and dreading the final chapter. Because, since this story first started, I've been hungrily reading it and devouring the tale with love, pain, and enjoyment. It was wonderful and will probably always be my favourite Mibba tale. Thank you so much for such a wonderful story. You, yourself, dear, are magnificent and sweet.
It was so great!!! But now I'm sad because it's over. You did a great job, youre an awesome writer and I really enjoyed reading your story. It made me smile when I got an email about an update. It was well written and I loved it.
You should try writing the last chapter in Derek and Ruth's point of view. Like, the same things happen but just, seeing the ending from both sides. Eeh, eeh, anyone with me?