I don't know if I have any words really. It's early in the morning, and I should be writing a paper. But I just wanted to say that I've enjoyed reading this more than I've enjoyed reading a story in a long time. I don't think that makes sense, but you'll have to forgive me. So sad that this is ending, but you've done a phenomenal job. You have. You have genuine talent, and you should stick with it.
I'm sot sure how I feel about her skipping out on telling Ryan about Derek. I don't know. But I was really happy to see Derek so fervent about her being with him. Really only because the whole time we've just seen Ruth wanting to sort of throw herself at him, and Derek seeming very aloof. This, though, this was different. I don't know if you meant it to turn out that way, but, yeah. It was nice to see.
here is your motivation. it is nicely wrapped with a bow and on a fucking satin pillow and shit. I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! does she get her stuff back from ryan? does he find out? do her and derek live happily ever after where he sings her to sleep every night and they have five beautiful blue-eyed piano playing children? I NEED TO KNOW WOMAN!
Ugh I'm just like...I can't...even....with this story anymore. I love it so much but it's like my enemy at the same time and MY BRAIN IS ALL EJAILWTJWA;ILRJAW. Ugh. I'm sorry. My last few comments have been all like...all over the fucking place. Ugh. I love this story more than anything else on here.
If my boyfriend ever had sex with a girl that he told me a million times he was JUST friends with, oh I would kill him....lol...I would feel so disgustingly betrayed. Sure, maybe I'd get over it eventually but I wouldn't want to be around that person for a while. What she's doing to Ryan is so beyond fucked up. If she doesn't tell him soon I'm going to scream or like beg you to write me into the story and jump her or something. So dumb so dumb SHE'S SO DUMB!
I get why she's wishy washy - I think that most of us are, I know I am. You want her to be with Derek because she has had this huge crush on him for what seems like forever, she's seen him and taken care of him through his darkest moments but Ryan has been nothing but good and loving to her and has seen her as a beautiful woman from the start - maybe that's what she needs. It's not an easy choice.
I think MY heart hurt when Derek said the word kid. Seriously amazing how emotional your words can make me. Lovely as ever, dear. Can't wait for the next one.
SHE IS SO STUPID, SHE NEEDS TO CHOOSE. THIS ISN'T A GAME, THESE ARE HUMAN BEINGS. But on the other hand omggg girl if I were her and he called me a kid I probably would've beaten the shit out of him lololol. Yeah Derek, this KID took care of your pathetic fucking ass while everyone else ditched you so YOU'RE WELCOME. Douchebag. God, men.