Come On, Sweet Catastrophe - Comments

[small]Okay, so I'm not likin' this whole feeling like his 'mom' thing. That won't work for me. They need to start something. :))[/small]

This seems likes it's going to he pretty amazing. :D

This sounds so wonderful. I would have cried, but I saw Remember Me today and it was the most depressing movie I have ever seen, so all my tears went to that. But I felt her emotions. I love the way you've written Derek's character.

And I LOVE the story line. I'm really excited and hope you conitinue this. :)

I love it.
Already, and I can't wait to know what happens. :)
But it's so sad. :(
Poor Derek.
~Chelsea~

I almost started crying at that. This is amazing so far and I already love it and it's only the prologue.
That has nothing to do with Derek being my favorite person in the world. no. ;D
I can't wait for more. <3

I really love how there's a hint of mysteriousness in the prologue. It makes the story even more interesting. I can't wait for more (:

I love that you've started a Derek story because, like you said, it's so hard to fing them.
The writing was wonderful and I'm really excited to see the story progress.
One suggestion though:
Your capitalization of 'mother', 'father', and 'brother' are wrong.
They should only be capitalized when they're used in place of the person's name.
When they follow a possesive noun like my, your, his, her, etc., like in the first couple paragraphs of your prologue, they shouldn't be capitalized.

oh wow, I was not expecting a fan-fiction at all, little less one about Derek Sanders. (Yay for hometown band pride!) I don't even know what to say about this opening chapter except for its so beautifully written that i almost started crying.
I love your other stuff, so why should it change about this story? c:

i love all of your work, and i'm extremely excited to see what this gets made into <3

amazing and such a different idea
I love it already. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

wow. very moving beginning. i love how you could feel how uneasy everything was when she approached him and how broken he was. i'm excited for this. it's going to be good, i can tell.