She's so Bright - Comments

Cliffhanga that was awesome! I like her.

so here i am not going to post a decent comment im so sorry OHMYGOD JOHN WAS THERE AND LET ME JUST AHH

I really love the story. I like Ellarie's POV a lot so maybe post more chapters in her POV? I'm really interested to see where this story will go.

oh god i'm watching pretty woman with my mom and i started giggling at the end of the chapter and now she's staring at me. anyway i really liked this chapter and it was nice to see ellarie's view of things. i can't wait to see how john reacts so please update soon! ☺

Please oh please update

i keep on rereading everything because omg it is so nice

MY FEELINGS OHMYGOD THIS IS AMAZING please please please update

I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY! Like I REALLY love it. I just want more. and you might be adding another chapter tonight? DO IT! Question, Is it just going to be in John's point of view though? I'd love to see even just a dabble into Ellarie's mind? I think that'd be really cool. just a thought. can't wait for more (:

I really really really really love this story. You have the best plot ever! And your writing style is really great, especially with john's thought lol! But you have to update soon!

john's thoughts omg the best

john's thoughts omg the best

hi this is so nice please update

Another update would be awesome today.

john is so funny! i wonder why garrett never mentioned her. and his infatuation with her is adorable ☺

Aw Ellery sounds so cute :3
And John in this is just perfect, I love how he reacted about blood in movies. And how he's reacting about Ellery...I'm sure this is going to be so cute.
I like this a lot, update soon?

just saw this! sounds pretty great and john made me laugh. update soon please ☺

I love this; update soon!(:

This is so misterious :O
Please keep writing it, I'm stoked about Quinn.

Quinn already sounds totally adorable.
I like this.
Keep doing it. :)

I love it already.
Update soon.