Quiet Little Monsters - Comments

THAT WAS REALLY HOT

Wow O.O they just can't stop throwing themselves at each other! Seems like Dolly can be a little threat for Harry... It's so cool that Finn can hear her thoughts or let her hear his. I wonder what makes Dolly and Finn's dad similar at mind reading...I suspect something not nice! : ( But I hope I'm wrong ^^

EEP! I'm getting excited for this as well. hehe. I do not like Harry in this story, not one bit. Gavin is a funny character, I want to see where he is going in this storyyyy. :DDD

<333

tehe @ Dolly

ps. I love you
and this stor-ray.

AHH! I love this so much~ <3
You're such an amazing writer (:

I adore Gavin:)
but Finn whoa!

I really like Gavin but then there's Finn…hmm=P

Wow the hand thing was amazing he can actually hear her thoughts! Is it just hers or can he read everyone's?

ah dont you hate when friends cant come up with good lies?
and i love this story! i read something like it but not as interesting as this!
how did they screw everything up? when do we get to meet "harry"? *giggles*
please update soon :D

In the words of my friend, "Oh my, things are getting steamy."
:)

I should have been writing, but I decided to read this instead. Very good.

I like Gavin... (:

I love her employees. They're amazing. :)
Especially Gavin's little crush on Dolly. D'awhhh.
I don't think Finn's a jerk. I think he's acting jerky, but he's not a jerk.
I loooooove this (:

Wow! I'm so happy that I found this story :D It's a really good story and it's a good read. I like Dolly a lot. She seems like a fun character. The story's really awesome. Finn doesn't seem like an asshole. More like a cocky, but nice guy. It's not only his problem that he's got a girlfriend. I wonder what happens next between those two and there's so many ways the story could go O.O Can't wait for more chapters to read :D Gavin seems like a nice guy too and Bella's thoughts when Finn showed up made me laugh. Actually...the whole situation. :D
Love the story! ^^

Gavin likes her :)
Finn is kind of cocky

I'm diggin' this story (:
did I really just say diggin'?
Wtf

i cant stop reading this! Its so darn good!

This is going to epic
:D

I just reread my comment and I fail.
I meant to say is "now full of douche" aha

your stories always suck me in! haha ;D
I thought this story would be interesting because I have this strange paranoia that someone will be able to read my mind and invade my thoughts. >_>
of course, this story will only worsen said paranoia, but oh well; it's worth it.

Bahahaha, her response to his confession of a girlfriend was epic. It def. made me smile. :D