Quiet Little Monsters - Comments

I'm loving this so far.

I like Finn a lot, until he wrapped himself in a bag and is not full of douche.
But Gavin, I see great things coming from him...but then I just have this annoying habit of creating unnecessary amounts of drama in stories so it's probably just me :)

i do not like Finn. i repeat i do not like him. but Gavin, ahh i like him lots.

i'm so dyslexic. *kaiser chiefs :P

Loving the updates!
and you like Kasier Chiefs too!? Fashhhow.
That song is ridiculously amazing.

i love bella and gavin. "don't look at her boobs. look at her face." lmao. i think i died laughing.

I love this one :)
Can't wait to know more about Finn!

he has a girlfriend!! what? well I never saw that one coming!
and this ... "Yup. You can bet on it. I totally do. I once punched the girl my boyfriend was cheating on me with while simultaneously kneeing said douchey boyfriend in the groin. It was awesome." is simply amazing

"My girlfriend –it was our anniversary yesterday."

I froze. What the fuck? What the fuck did he just say?

"Huh?" I asked icily and looked up at him. His face was hesitant when he replied, "Um. My girlfriend?"

"You have a girlfriend? And you let me kiss you that night?! And you kissed back?!" I cried.

"Hey! I don't know what that was. I just... You took me by surprise."

"Yeah, okay. Fuck you very much. See you never," I said and began hurdling up the street.

Finn, you effed up.

:O
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^And that is all.

i loooooove this.

sorry that quote didn't copy right. I also like "Fuck you very much." Stupid Finn! I hate boys like that!!

*does a happy dance and subscribes* :p

"y second new employee was named Bella, who had once really liked her name, but now loathed it after a popular vampire movie came out and "disgraced her name forever."
hi my name is caroline AND I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS

I love both Gavin and Bella. (oh and Dolly and Finn and your whole fucking story.)
You've got yourself another suscriber, missy! ;D

Sounds interesting :) Going to subscribe!

loved
lmao "Yeah, okay. Fuck you very much. See you never," made me lol

:)
I love you, and this story.

Psh. Your the amazing one!
I seriously do love this, I don't even know what to say other than that. It's just so gooood. I love Luella (awesome name by the way).

"...he reads my mom's thoughts. But she's not related to him by blood."
Haha I would hope not!!
I'm actually reading a book called Middlesex where a brother and a sister get married, and then their son and his first cousin get married...and then their grandkid is born as both a boy then a girl, but they don't know it and she grows up as a girl then later gets a sex change. It's WEIRD. But it's pretty good haha.

"I had just [ran?] two blocks away from the restaurant and now he was practically carrying me back.

And awww they kissed. I'm glad it's not awkward. If that happened to me it would be MORTIFYING to see the guy the next day. But then again I'm ridiculously awkward anyway.