Well, I clicked on the last chapter thinking it was the latest chapter that I haven't read but when I read "a year together" I was like, "WHAT? When did a year pass?!" So I went to the author's notes and it said "its' finished"
You should've seen my face haha.
Anyways, it's so good and it kills me to stop reading enough to comment haha but I am.
Finn is just so yummy !
And every time I read I keep thinking about how young you are but how mature everything in the story really is. I swear it's like I'm reading something written by a middle-aged woman. (No offence with the whole old lady reference haha.)
You really are a great writer, J. :]
And I would kill for my mother to stop talking to me. Sometimes she's just a bit too much. Huh.
This is hands down my favorite story right now. It brings a smile to my face whenever I think about it. You did an amazing job Joyce, it's simply wonderful. It's a little bittersweet that's it over now though.
You know, you are absolutely right about the 3 primary subjects. :D I'm so glad that someone else has tried to observe and dissect the general human mind...I do it all the time, and it kinda makes me feel like a weirdo. Haha! Anyway, great job on this story--it's borderline good enough to be published, for real. I'm really interested on how the plot-line is going to end!
It's done? No, it can't be! NOOOOO!!!!!!!!! I'm demanding a sequel! I'll message you everyday until you post something up! Promise! And I never break a promise unless I forget it! SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ah, yeah, you were right, I'm pretty much in love with Finn at this point it's a little ridiculous. That was a very lovely story, I enjoyed reading it :)
That was such a nice ending :) I think Dolly has finally come to terms with herself and her mother so it was a great way to wrap up :D Thanks for writing such a super duper AWESOME story!!