Quiet Little Monsters - Comments

*claps* ah. Mah. Zing.

AMAZING STORY <3

I really liked the ending, it was a nice way to finish off the story :)

But I am going to miss it a lot.

awww yay!
but poor gavin :(

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO It's almost over!!! :(
Thanks for writing such an awesome story!!!

Aww, one more chapter? How sad:( I really enjoyed reading this:D

Awwww that was so cute :)
Poor Gavin though

I love you. I seriously do. Your story is freaking awesome, and now I'll behave like Dolly for a week because I was too much into this story. I don't like her mom. And you know what? Even if I don't read minds, I feel stuff. It's pretty much the same, except I just know, I can't hear the words. Anyways, UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please. And talk to me, I don't bite ;)

haha I just had to fix their* because I noticed it and it was bothering me lol so yay another comment for you. I love this story a lot!! :)

Awww there hug was heartwarming. I'm sad this story is ending, but happy I was given the opportunity to read it so thank you for that!! :)

Gah, I don't know what else to say besides that I love this.
I just love it.
And you.
And Finn.
And Dolly.
And Eve.
And Leon.
I love everything.

you know after seeing all your comments i dont truly think you can say silent readers =P just be glad you HAVE readers my wonderful writer<3
so i just caught up with your updates and i am happy to see they are together and that Dolly has finally stopped pretending to be a fake happy person and has finally opened herself up.
i cant wait to see her mother!!
and my name is Lenya and i love Chocolate Milk with a passion!! XD

I forbade (hmm..) myself to read anything on Mibba until June 10th. But then I ended up – randomly, I might add – to this page. I forgot about this beautiful story. And about Finnaeus. (I've always loved his full name. Don't ask why.)

Anyways, just wanted to say – once again haha – that I love this story.
And that I might read another chapter – number 15 now – even though I promised not to. :]

Wow! I'm so in love with this story : ) Finn and Dolly are so cute together. And Finn's dad sounds so cool. I sort of am afraid of what may happen when they get back ;/

amazingggg<3

HOLY FUCK I LOVE THIS. i love it, i love it, i love it. leon is so freaking adorable, i wish i had family like that haha this story is so incredibly cute

lovely update. I honestly do completely love this story, and I still can't get over your writing. I smell a future best-seller :P xox

This story is really good and I love your writinggg styleee! I have never read a story where the character(s) were in New Hampshire..so I am excited because that's where I live! Weird part is my best friend lives in Rochester...:D Her lovely nickname for it is rottenchester.

Awesome chapter (and yes, I'm freaking out about what's about to happen in San Francisco, so I'll just stay in the dream world of smiling breakfasts of this chapter, thank you very much).

random fact: the best compliment I ever received was this girl telling me I should've been born in a different era ("preferably the 20s") because of how I dressed.

I'm so happy that Dolly met Finn's dad...I'm just scared as to what's going to happen when they get back to San Francisco.

And yes, I am one of those adored/frustrating silent reader. My one random fact about myself is that when I was younger, I was deathly afraid of butterflies.