Where Truth Lies - Comments

I love the theatrics of Mrs. Taylor's grief. I can picture her so well, all sobbing, with a high pitched voice, talking about how her daughter could never do harm.

Very good chapter!

fucking awesomeness!!!!!! Honestly, this is super kick ass - and dont you forget it!!!!!!!!!!!!! That's a lot of exclamation points...well...yeah...=D hahaha, i jsut busted out laughing, anyway...PUDING! Alright well, keep on writing chicka, your stories (yes, all of them) ROCK!

There are a lot of people involved in this, crap! I'm going to get confused, I know it.
Stupid Levi Balmer. Why did he have to get involved?
I bet they took his car. BUT WHY?
I have no idea where this story is going. You're quite good at keeping the suspense up and going.
I love you. I know, I know, it's kind of early for that but I really do love you.
:D

This is brilliant I cannot wait for more!!

Poor Poor Cass.
Should pay more attention to that note.
God, I'm loving this story more and more.
amazing.
I hope you know I stalk your profile.
Can't wait til the next chapter.

well, finally I read the new version of "where Truth lies" and I have to say that it's a million times better than the original and that's really a lot because also the last version was awesome... but now, this is amazing!!!!XD

Yay Iove this!!! I love how you said dun dun dun in the author's note, that's exactly how I feel. Oh the suspense!!! P.S. I love Leo <3

Lot's of info in the new chapter :)
Whoa, the girls mom seems alittle freaky and strange and just plain phyco :P
Update soon please :)

Levi's back!

Don't worry about boring, this most definitely is not :)
If you haven't picked anyone yet, I wouldn't mind editing it in the least.

Oh God. Being buried alive. Not fun! Very interesting. I love all of the suspense in this with all of the unanswered questions that come up!

Great chapter! Also, I could possibly be a beta for you (since I love editing), but you should know I leave for Germany for two weeks on the 15th.

Oh my gosh, I love this story :) I really really do. I'm so in love with it :)
Great job :)

gahh dude I love how you begin each chapter. It sort of uncurls as you go along and it's so suspenful, even though I've already read the first version!

Very interesting chapter
Wonder why he's in the coffin
And why she got that letter
Update very soon please :)

YEP. DEFINITELY LIKING THIS MORE THAN THE GUIDE.

I'll be your beta. I'm already beta-ing for my friend Taylor. I really don't mind. I'm obsessive compulsive about grammar and whatever.

The only backdraw is that I won't be on again very much until the end of June, so...

BUT I really want you to name a character after me.
xD

I must say right now I'm loving the re-write.
Such a great job. This story is going to be epic.
And Tommy. OMG! I love that little one-year old so much.


"Here." Jerry said, after watching Cass struggle for several minutes. "He doesn't like you." He pulled Tommy out of her arms, and magically, Tommy transformed into an angel and quietly sat down in his seat without a single protest.

"Hey Tommy," Jerry sang as he started the car. "Isn't Cass such a smart person?"

"No."

"Wow Cass. It's a good thing Tommy doesn't know how to lie."

Does that mean Cass is a smart person?

Oh man oh man oh mannnnn. I can totally tell that you have this all planned out. This is just..wow. I seriously am hooked on this story. It's already so interesting! I don't even know what to say. I think I might love this even more than I love Guide. It's a shocker, I know :P

This was really good, I love the first line

Truth Keller was no truth-teller awsome! :D

Lots of things happening in this chapter!
And it's getting very interesting :)
Update soon please! :)