The Disease Called Men - Comments

Your story has me in fits of laughter like no other story has had me before. I am so grateful that I stumbled upon it. Keep it up. :)

Love this! I finally got my sister to read it and she was just staring at the computer for a half hour. Good stuff. I lurve the bald principle. Making fun of teachers is so fun. I would know - my principle is like a dinosaur because she walks around with her head jutting out and her arms bent at the elbows. But, however, on the other hand, although, she is not my mother (thank the Lordddyy)

Hi. :)

I found this story on my wi---coughcoughcough, I mean, SpinningTale's profile so you were totally worth a check. It's been a day, maybe two since I've read the first couple of chapters but I didn't seem to have time to comment until now I guess.

I must say, the style of writing is amazing and you have my envy. :D Well, it's rather witty and entertaining, which is pretty much the way I talk. Although I don't understand a couple of things at times (don't worry, it's mostly the jokes and stuff), I'm not put off. So yeah. I'll be reading at a slow pace because of my hiatus but nevertheless, I will be reading.

I have subscribed. (:

PS: Gah, I don't know whether or not I would feel the same about the boys. If everyone is going crazy, then I'd take the other side just for the heck of it. But I've always been in co-ed (except this last year) so I could or could not end up being biased. (in the end, we all know what happens. -_-')

Cerise...is...my hero! Lies I say! Lies! I speak like her a lot sometimes, I can totally connect. ;) Looking forward to more 'stupidity' from her.

This story just totally made my boredom crumble into duckin' nothingness!
I'm lovinn' it. Update sooon. :)

PS Mrs Twiddles is my favourite character. ;3

We're nearing the part where you started to rewrite. New material! Yesh.

No! march on beat me to it! I feel so upstaged.

Mrs. Twiddles sounds like one of those creepy cat ladies who have nothing better to do. And I love that Cerise's assumptions of her are all spot on.

Haha. Poor Nikko. I can't believe her dad is making him take responsibility for 'mock flirting.' I really hope that Cerise keeps up the whole hubby/wifey act up. It's hilarious. :)

And what's up with Yasmin? She pretty much generalized all of the Brookefield boys. Not cool.

Now onto your suggestion of giving up your brother. Would that entail him being a servant, where he will do all of my chores?

“Oh, nothing. Nothing.” Replied Yasmin as she gave him a slow and berating once over.
The full stop isn't necessary.

Nikko glared at me after we catch Mrs. Twiddles’ curtain twitch again.
Catch ought to be caught.

“Hey wale!”
Oh you sneaky wale, you.

I think you meant "whale", not "wale".

Other than that I loved the update. I can't even point out specific parts 'cos I love the whole chapter. Except maybe the part where Cerise fibbed to Yasmin about Nikko being her husband - that part cracked me up.

I love you. Seriously.

What a wonderfully fast update. You, my dear, are my hero of the moment.
My family consists of he same amount of people! There's seven of us, too. Dad, mom, and five kids. Only exception: four girls and one boy. My brother is the second oldest, I'm the first.
Her mom is awesome. She says the same thing about my brother not being able to get a girlfriend because of us, his crazy and protective sisters. We've already told the poor kid that we were going to give his possible future girlfriend a very intense questioning while for ing her to hang out with us for a day to see if she's wothy. We're that bad.

Abd again, I pray for more genius. :)

I love this so much.
The long summary just completely interested me.
I love the main characters personality and your writing style. <3

Cerise is hysterical. She reminds me of my elementary school self. I didn't even want to touch my brother, never willingly gave him a hug back then.
I feel as though Lee-min is the only one who thinks logically. Haha.
Those fortune cookies...haha...oh man. If I ever had my hands on those fortune cookies I could cause some serious mayhem.

MORE PLEASE! :)

i love the pronounciation tips, although i was confused once i got it i fell off my bed in a fit of giggles and was then rushed to by my mother who had a fit if anything broke.
sad that you had to re-start i quite like the stupidity and non-sense this story makes, it's quite fascinating.
yours loyally,

Wow, the father really IS stingy. I thought it was something off hand and not so serious. I'm stingy and I'm sayng this of someone else so...wow. I don't have a job and I'm 18...but getting jobs here is hard to do if you're as short as I am and you look 15. -__- More updates!

lol.
i love this story.
it need more cedit.
and i liked the fish thing.
i had that card in my binder for like ever.:)
oh btw new reader:)

Having a life isn't that great...(shakes head solemnly) Updates are more important than getting a job! (unless you're really broke that is)

lolz... awesome update! Nikko and Cerise are husband and wife! :P
I love your wonderful story!!!

What, me? Pointing out grammatical errors? I'll have you know I'm not that obsessed with such small details in the grand scheme of things. Ah! There's a hair on my keyboard! Make it go away!

Erm, ignore my mental relapse. Awesome chapter! PLEASE update soon!

Damn...my family's pretty normal. Oh! And just something I have to say because it's been irking me for weeks is that you use 'your' when you should use 'you're...minor detail I know. I'm sorry.