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one of the best stories ever

I just finished reading this story and I loved every chapter. It is so different to other ones that I've read. Can't wait to read the sequel =)

just found this story and it's just soo different! Love it :) can't wait to read the sequel :)

Loved it! About to start on the sequel!!

I know you are like, whoa a comment on this old thing. But I'm reading your Sidney story and decided to check out your other ones and stumbled across the sequel to this and thus led me here. Anyways...can i just say that this was the cutest story in the world! I loved it. Jordyn is the sweetest girl in the world and Jonathan is doing a wonderful job at raising her. Now I'm going to read the sequel =)

Now IDK if you know this but my friend sent me a picture of Jonathan and a little girl, isntatnly made me think of this story.

awwwww..... so adorable i loved this story very much :)

Oh man.
I can't believe that this is over.
This was such a well written story.
You are so talented. I've really enjoyed this story.
But at least there is a sequel!
I can't wait for it:)

aww this ending was so cute!
i definitely can't wait for the sequel :)

OMG.
this was amazing =)
cannot wait till the sequel!

AWE. I'm so upset that it's over, but I'm happy you're making a sequel. :) I loved this story so, so much. :)<3

sequel

Love it, cant wait for the seguel

A very beautiful ending!
I can't wait for the sequel! I know it's going to be awesome!Maybe Jon will get a lady friend?
I know he's gonna have a hard time keeping boys away from Jordyn.
I can't wait! :)

The same magazine that offered one-point-five million dollars for the story once word got out that Jonathan Toews was offering a very intimate peek into his life.
I'd talk too :D

don’t have to worry about walking to school or when I’m going to eat next
that is terrible.. no one should have to go through that especially not a baby.. :(

“St. Lucia.” Jon corrected/i]
LUCIA!! EEPPP!!! hahahahaha :D

Patty came and got me from the bleachers because people were watching me cry.
and every girls ovaries bounced when we read that hahaha

“I like to think that I was her birthday present last year, but –undoubtedly- she’s my gift.”
OHHH!!! PROUD PAPA JON!!! SOOO CUTE!!! <3 <3

fahjkfleawdjakldm!!!!!!!!
ohmygod!!!!!
i absolutely loved the end of that! the way you tied everything together!
I loved loved loved watching jon turn into daddy. To go from being her friend to being her dad and taking care of her. They definitely had their ups and downs and all sorts of complications but they made it out okay :D
I know the sequel is going to be great as well. This was better than you average jonathan toews and it showed that a man can have a different kind of love for an extermely awesome girl :D
love love love loved this x 42817939433892
and sequel soon please!!!!!!!!!
<3 <3 <3<3

oh my gosh! I love how the last chapter was like a recap of all that happened! This story is by far my favorite story on this website. I can't wait for the sequel!

I've got a suggestion for the sequel as well! Maybe have Jon get a girlfriend and have Jordyn get jealous or something along those line. I'm so excited!!

Thank you so much for writing such an amazing story. You are a VERY talented writer and I envy your talent =]

awww, the things both Jon and Jordyn said during the interview were precious!

I cannot believe this story is finished):
but thank you so much for making a sequel!

I saw the picture of the older Jordyn and she is absolutely GORGEOUS!

can't wait for the first update of that!

thank you for writing one of the greatest stories on mibba.
you did a fantastically,amazingly,phenominal job with each and every chapter.
hahaha(:

I can't believe this is finished already, I'm so sad to see that it ended but I really loved the final chapter and I can't wait to see what you have in store for these two in the sequel!

Okay dude, I loved this story soo much, but I can't even think of a good comment after that mind-blowing ending! I loved where Jonathan put the title into his last answer, i almost made me cry! For the sequel, well your an amazing writer, you'll think of something! I just really wanna meet the first steady boyfriend, who breaks her heart. : ]
Evil aren't I?
<3

That ending was just adorable. I'm glad you are writing a sequel! I can't wait! I agree with people who commented before me. I think Jon should start dating, maybe meeting a few girls who don't understand and are mean with Jordyn, but eventually he finds the right person and they have a bigger family. And then it'd be great to see Jon dealing with Jordyn growing up (dating, friends, high school drama etc..). Hope you can start the sequel soon!