Fearing Death - Comments

OMG that was adorable! I love how they just are so amazing!!!

I can't wait for the sequel

I'm so sad to see it end. I cried like a baby in the ending.

Yay a sequel!!! I'd love to see a love interest come into Jordyn's life and see how Jon deals with it then maybe Jon finds a woman. All in all it's up to you!!

Awwww!!! I loved that ending... I almost cried a little hahaha
I'm soooooo happy you decided to do a sequel :)
I think Jordyn should get a boyfriend, and then Jon has to find a way to deal with it hahaha

Aww that was such a sweet ending! It made me tear up a bit!
I'm so glad you're doing a sequel! I want Jon to find someone special so Jordyn can have a mom and lots of siblings! :)

Noo! The story is finished! I am definitely excited for the sequel and I'm going to miss waiting for the update on this one. It was definitely one of my favourite stories to date on this site.

For the sequel, I think an interesting idea would be Jon finding a girl and seeing Jordyn's reaction and her and Jon's adjustments that they'd have to make when it's not just the two of them anymore? Just a thought...

:)

“I’m very lucky.” She mumbled quietly as Jon leaned down to press a warm kiss to her temple.

“You deserve every bit of it, baby.”
Aweeee. That was so freaking cute. I love, love, love this story so freaking much<3

I just realized while reading this that if she wasn't living with Jon.. she would have died. like her foster parents would not have taken care of her. she just would have died.. ohh how sad.

Jon laughed, remembering the way the small pup tried to keep up with him as he took him for a spin around the block. “I had to carry him back to the house, pretty pathetic if you ask me.” He joked.
hahahahahhahah poor puppy. don't worry pooch. I wouldn't be able to keep up either

“In the mean time, I need you to eat, eat, eat.” He insisted.
sigh.. i wish eating so much was a good thing for me :p can't we envy her for a moment before getting back to reality that it isnt a good thing she has to eat so much

“I want to go to the zoo.” Hjlamy spoke up from his new perch in the recliner.
hahahahah i love this <3 such a kid at heart

“A certain friend of ours from Pittsburgh.” Jon added, placing a hand on her knee as she began to swing her legs much more excitedly.
I wish he sent me mail.... huff. no big deal, just got a package from sid the kid :p

“Pizza’s here, two eggplant parmesan slices just for you!”
that sounds absolutely disgusting.

“And it’s signed by the whole team… even Lemieux…” Jon trailed, wishing he wasn’t so jealous.
shit. she has THE LIFE. i want her life.. huff huff huff.

well I'm glad she is a grateful kid and not a brat. not tha tI expected her to be.
but thankfully she is okay and healing well! I was nervous!
I liked this chapter.. it was cute and fluffy and jon was being mr. mean dad and stern dad. hahaha it is still funny to see him act that way. he has come a long way from giving her everything she wanted :D he's turned into quite the super dad :D
more soon?? even if it means this ends :p

awwwh!so adorable!

I think it's hilarious that Max couldn't make it around the block.poor pup.

I love the Jonny was a tad jelous of Jordyn's jersey.

can't wait for more!
I still vote for a sequel:D

f.a.n.t.a.s.t.i.c. job AGAIN:)

Oh my god thank you! hahah that made my day =] I'm so glad she's okay! I'm extremely sad that the next chapter is going to be the last =[ I still vote yes on the sequel. Of course XD

Great chapter, I loved it!
I loved how protective Jon is of Jordyn!
Can't believe the next chapter is the last one! :(

D'awwww, Daddy gettin all protective!
I love it! Thought it was so cute.
I still think that there should be a sequel and Jonny should get a fiance and her name should be Charli.....or Charlotte, seeing as that is my "legal name" :P
I don't want this to end...I've gotten too attached to these two!
And I don't wanna ask for more cause I know it will be the end :P haha

I think them doing a press conference is a good idea. Just to get some questions answered for all the nosey people.

I'm excited for the next update but sad at the same time since it's the last one.

I loved this update :) I hope you'll do a sequel hehehehe

I vote that jon finally meets someone in the final chapter and then you have a sequel!

aw, i loved this chapter... everyone spoiling her, it's adorable!

DAMN!!! crosby spoiled her didn't he? & her crush hjalmy is just so adorable <3

I'm really sad, because the next chapter is the last. Have you made up your mind about a sequel?

PLLLLEEEEEEEAAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEEEE UPDATE SOON!
I loved it as usual!

<3

So cute
: D

NO!!! Please dont end, I will go through withdrawals. *tears* Great update honey

amazing update!