Fearing Death - Comments

Awww don't end this story!!!! I truly love it

Well I loved the update, even if you think it wasn't the best, I thought it was great! At first when I found your story, I was kind of on the fence because it was different then other ones on here, but now I love it. It's definately not like the other stories on here, but it's really great. Hope you can update again soon. Have you decided on whether or not you will write a sequel or not?

I was hoping you'd update today so I'd have something to cheer me up after my first day of school lol well PLEASE UPDATE SOON! l

haha me again! And I'm begging for another update as usual. haha so, Please! update soon!!

Oh, and forgot to mention in my last comment, but a sequel would be lovely!

Please update soon!! I can't handle not knowing whether or not everything is okay with Jordyn!!

Once again! here I am. haha. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
ps thanks for the comment on my Adam story hehe =]

aw, poor jon and jordyn.... can't wait to see what's going to happen next!

Jon was in a coma, ranked a thirteen on the Glasgow scale, and was expected to pull out of it in the next few days.
NO BIG DEAL! you know, i was banking for a concussion, not flipping COMA!

It broke Abby’s heart, and she gently placed her hand on her swollen stomach, a small cord of fear ringing through her that she and Patrick’s child would ever have to witness something like this.
oh :( no baby should have to see their dad like that.. adopted or not :( so sad. wake up jonny! wake up!

“Don’t leave me.” She whispered gently. “We haven’t had enough time together.” She added, eyes welling again. “Don’t leave me alone.” She hiccupped quietly. “I miss you.”
OHMYGOD. SERIOUSLY!?!? I'M GOING TO CRY! that is ridiculously sad :( oh! oh! Jon! wake up damn it! :( :( :(

she hadn’t seen him for a whole day and she missed him dearly
lol I love that.. A WHOLE DAY! but i guess she probably misses patty even more now that jon is in a COMA. gee, that is some seriously tough luck for jordyn. she hasn't had that great of a life :( and then she had an awesome life with the toews fam and now this happens.. SIGH

They had no reason to believe that he would be much longer and should be opening his eyes and talking as soon as tomorrow afternoon.
thank god <3 he needs to wake up and be her dad.

Bryan and Andree were stuck in Winnipeg, a terrible snow storm had all but trapped them in Canada, but God-willing, Andree was close to renting her own plane and flying herself to Chicago
OH! HAHAHAHAH! that is funny! not that they are stuck in canada but that mama toews is gonna get there even if there is a storm! love it. plus i was wondering where the hell she was!

“Haven’t we seen this one?” He croaked gently.
OH.MY.GOD! *BLUBBERS* OHMYGOD! OHMYGOD! THAT WAS SO CUTE! <3 <3 <3 <3 ohmygosh.. im so happy he is awake! ohh! yay!

“Men’s nipples!” She answered perkily, making both men chuckle
BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! it's just for looks jord ;)

“The one with the big butt?” She added, making Jon’s face burst into a bright pink.
*Dies* THAT KID JUST DISSES GREATNESS! HILARIOUS! HAHAHAHAHAHAH!

ordyn also insisted that Jon get the miniature version of her bear, only a few inches tall and blue, but the same bear nonetheless that would look rather nice on his big bed when it was made.
think of all the shit the boys could give him for that. lol that is so awkward

“Who’re you?”
HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH ohhh jordyn. you still have so much to learn about the hockey world.

“I didn’t want you to miss out on your Dad/Daughter dance entirely.”
happy sigh... father of the year goes to jonathan toews

Jon helped Abby along, now at an incredible eight months pregnant, carrying the cooler for her as she rubbed sun block on her protruding stomach.
CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I JUST DIED FROM THAT CUTENESS! HAHAHAH!

Brent Seabrook with his girlfriend, Brianna
*SCREAMS* BRENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3 <3 <3 <3 YESSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!

Jon made sure that Jordyn didn’t hold one fish long enough to make a bond with it, or for the least part, name it.
hahahahahaha that was an awesome chapter :D

Prince Maxwell Jonathan Toews
ohmygosh.. bahahahah what a name

Two and a half weeks ago on the lake for Jon’s birthday, Patrick and Sara announced a surprise, that Sara was two and a half months pregnant.
OHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! CUTE!!!!!!!!! bahahahaha patrick as a dad.. that is going to be VERY interesting

what.the.hell.
I just read 4 chapters.. of perfection.. of happiness.. of love!
and now! jordyn is having surgery! on her heart!
gee, now im depressed..
things were going so well.. SO WELL!
*sigh*
I don't really have much to say except that I really suck at reading updates but these were really really great.
sorry I was four chapters behind :p
but i'm all caught up so you can update again! :D :D :D!!!!
hehehehehe

I really love this story!! and I would love it even more if there was a sequel!
i think all your stories are really good! love them all.
can't wait for your next update! and I really hope to see a sequel!
great job!!!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! IM DYING HERE!!

Awh :(

I think I'm going to make it a habit of commenting on this once a day until you update. haha and then after that as well. I just love this story so much1

She better be okay!
And whaaa Patty and Sarah?? A baby?! Aweee...
more soon im loving this?
:)

OMG!! I hope Jordyn is okay!!! Please update soon!!

aww poor jordyn !! :(
Update please.

Awe that poor baby!!!:(
updateee

...... Bu...Bu...... But..... SHE WAS FINE!!!!..... UGH : (
I love it, but she has to be alright!!! SHE JUST HAS TOO! : '[
Poor Jonathan, he's been through so much with this little bundle of joy!
I L O V E D it!
Plllllleeeeeeeaaaaaaassssssseeeeee Update soon : ] !

I did not see that coming. I hope she's ok after the surgery.

Please tell me she survives tho!!