Ahh!!! I love your descriptions!!! And I totally know someone like Dimitri and it's awesome that you put him in your story, and that she hates him makes it all the more better:D Come the updates coming cause I'm loving this!
Wow, this sounds quite intense and your style is very impressive. There were a few typos in the firest chapter though. Like my christmas, when I think you meant by christmas. I'm quite excited for the next chapter though!
A breath of fresh air! I love dystopia so much...too bad almost nobody writes it on this site. It's great to have a story with some ambition for a change. The narrative was very well handled and the vocabulary was amazingly used.
I loved her father's character. It seemed very real. Developement on the others will be crucial, but as for now, I'm really hooked.