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  • xXLostXSoulXLoverXx

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    September 12th is my birthday too!!! I wasn't expecting the twist but I like it :)
    February 4th, 2013 at 05:50am
  • ButterGirl96

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    LOVED IT! keep up the good work on your stories.
    August 1st, 2011 at 02:26am
  • celestial_royalty

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    I don't know why the title for this story is so familiar- have I commented it before? I know I've read your Harry Potter story but this is disturbingly familiar. The Seth-loves-whoever-even-though-she-was-imprinted is definitely something I've read before. I love how he turned out. Near the end though, with all of the years passing, I felt really sad. Seth, Embry, Alex, Paul, they're all going to die! And even though Edward and Bella and everyone will get to know their children, will knowing their children and their children after that really be enough? Bella was like a sister to Alex, and they were so close. Could watching her grow old and die, and the same with Lillie, really fill a void in her heart?
    February 24th, 2011 at 11:26am
  • skinny love.

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    But.. I am still hoping for Paul and her... Seth is.. well I like the love between
    Paul and her... >.>
    January 8th, 2011 at 07:39pm
  • skinny love.

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    NEVERMIND LOL.
    I remember some Paul being a dick and stuff haha. xD
    January 8th, 2011 at 07:31pm
  • skinny love.

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    Umm...
    This was a Paul story, and then the second to last chapter, was about
    her and Seth... this is confusing.....
    D:
    January 8th, 2011 at 07:31pm
  • after all this time;

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    You so have to do a sequel!
    December 30th, 2010 at 09:09pm
  • pjfunnbunny

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    ahahaha! I freakin love it!!!!!
    Fudgeeeee xD
    December 30th, 2010 at 11:05am
  • Dani.Love.

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    Please update soon!! I cant wait to see what going to happen after Lucas is born. I love this story <3
    December 28th, 2010 at 01:31am
  • skinny love.

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    This would be even better if it was in either first person or third person POV...
    The way it's written for the reader... eh.. >.<
    But anyways, it's good. You have nice writing.
    December 27th, 2010 at 10:46pm
  • sunshine5456789

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    I love it
    December 27th, 2010 at 09:33pm
  • broctopus;

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    alright i missed alot!!
    awe i like the updated ending!!! it was so cute!!!
    December 27th, 2010 at 04:31pm
  • The Hallows

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    AW!!!
    I abseloutley loved the last chapter, and I love seth and alex together :D
    Update soon!
    December 27th, 2010 at 03:58pm
  • AcklesObsession

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    I love your story! But i like Alex with Paul, not Seth. i mean seths a good kid but Pauls just better for her:)
    December 27th, 2010 at 11:12am
  • The Hallows

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    so I decided not to be a silent reader today ^.^
    I love love LOVE this story!
    Grr I can't wait for more updates!! :)
    December 11th, 2010 at 03:19am
  • Dani.Love.

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    I love that they are together but something seems off.. Please write more *puppy dog eyes*
    December 3rd, 2010 at 02:58am
  • shygirl1993

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    i have a feeling he s going to imprint on the baby lol thats funny
    December 2nd, 2010 at 11:53pm
  • WelcomeToMyWorld

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    I LOVE IT! :)
    keep updating, I wnna find out what happens with the baby and stuff...and the imprint and everything!
    Love this story, keep going! :) <3
    December 2nd, 2010 at 10:54pm
  • Natsu

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    Seth is the freakin' man right now. Team Seth!
    December 1st, 2010 at 11:58pm
  • broctopus;

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    Boo ya! seth is the bomb diggity! haha
    loved the update, and paul must feel mighty
    "salty" is that what people say now a days? anyway
    awesome update :DD
    December 1st, 2010 at 12:50pm
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