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  • kaylababee143

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    I like the current pov
    October 1st, 2010 at 08:40am
  • trinkeyk

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    I like 1st P.O.V
    September 30th, 2010 at 06:07am
  • iFeel.Like.A.Monster

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    Aww I feel so bad for alex. Pauls being a jerk.

    Update update
    September 30th, 2010 at 05:14am
  • cosmicanparo

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    :D
    September 30th, 2010 at 04:58am
  • The Hallows

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    AH! you need to update now before i explode from suspense.
    i love love love love love it :D!
    please update soon
    September 22nd, 2010 at 11:15pm
  • Xx..Miss..Th..xX

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    D= cliffhanger or what?
    im subscribing its amazing! :O
    September 21st, 2010 at 09:26pm
  • iFeel.Like.A.Monster

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    Nooooo why did it have to end!!!!!!
    It was getting soooo goood

    Update
    September 21st, 2010 at 04:55am
  • lyric01

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    I love it:)
    August 29th, 2010 at 11:47pm
  • teigster

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    you should deff change the narrative! i would like that better =D
    August 27th, 2010 at 04:59am
  • iFeel.Like.A.Monster

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    oh no whats going to happen to her?

    but the story is great!!!!!
    July 24th, 2010 at 03:19pm
  • teigster

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    OMG this story is amazing!
    I'm in love :D
    im so glad you didn't make Alex move!!!!!!!!!!!
    but whos attacking her??
    she needs her paul!
    July 23rd, 2010 at 10:49pm
  • MykalaNoelle

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    i love this story! :)
    July 13th, 2010 at 11:04pm
  • why.LOVE.me?

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    keep up

    love it

    update soon
    July 13th, 2010 at 10:26pm
  • VampLover15e

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    Deffinatly can read this. This chapter was very sad. Don't take Alexis away :( But it was a great update. So will you post more soon?
    July 13th, 2010 at 09:37pm
  • WildxoxoOne

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    Love this :) Yes I can read it lol I can't wait for the next update.
    July 13th, 2010 at 08:54pm
  • teigster

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    i LOVE Paul! this is a wonderful story! your writing style is epicness :D
    man I hope Paul and Alex get together! and is Jacob gonna tell her about Bella?!!???
    UPDATE SOON!
    June 29th, 2010 at 08:16am
  • VampLover15e

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    This is an awesome story!! :D I love it. and lmao at her insults to her stepmom :D more soon??
    June 26th, 2010 at 05:51am
  • iFeel.Like.A.Monster

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    This story is AMAZING

    keep updating

    :)
    June 25th, 2010 at 04:31pm
  • Lijgirl1328

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    Thanks guys!
    June 25th, 2010 at 03:15pm
  • why.LOVE.me?

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    OMG

    UPDATE SOON

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    June 25th, 2010 at 03:09pm
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