I don't know why the title for this story is so familiar- have I commented it before? I know I've read your Harry Potter story but this is disturbingly familiar. The Seth-loves-whoever-even-though-she-was-imprinted is definitely something I've read before. I love how he turned out. Near the end though, with all of the years passing, I felt really sad. Seth, Embry, Alex, Paul, they're all going to die! And even though Edward and Bella and everyone will get to know their children, will knowing their children and their children after that really be enough? Bella was like a sister to Alex, and they were so close. Could watching her grow old and die, and the same with Lillie, really fill a void in her heart?
This would be even better if it was in either first person or third person POV... The way it's written for the reader... eh.. >.< But anyways, it's good. You have nice writing.
Boo ya! seth is the bomb diggity! haha loved the update, and paul must feel mighty "salty" is that what people say now a days? anyway awesome update :DD