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  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE!!!!

    Thanks for the update, but holy freaking giant donkey balls, WHY did you have to leave us there?!?!
    ...can we get an update...soon?
    I mean, seriously. Hayden can't die, and Raven can't die. Because if they did, how would they be together?!
    Seriously?!
    Anyway, sorry. I'm a bit hyper...so, yeah. I'll be going with a final "Please update soon!!!!"
    May 16th, 2010 at 08:50pm
  • sinsa-4-eva

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    =O
    Well, at least they aren't dead. I would have died if you'd left it at a cliffhanger where they could be dying...
    But... They're okay! I hope. Probably got hypothermia or something. Not cool. But at least they aren't dead!
    More soon?
    May 16th, 2010 at 06:01pm
  • KelseyKalamity

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    Okay...This story has got me crackin' up like CRAZZYYY!!
    haha, i love this story so much bahaha :P
    May 16th, 2010 at 07:42am
  • katelynnjosee

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    I had to read the Princess Bride in school, and I loved it. I haven't had the pleasure of watching the movie though. Is it better than the book?
    Once again, fabulous update. I loved it, even if it was killing me slowly. ;)
    Hope everyone keeps their toes.
    May 16th, 2010 at 07:24am
  • sinsa-4-eva

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    Ah man... I loved it <3
    I was laughing my butt off, with the whole bra thing. Here I was thinking one of the boys was going through their presents. Then we find out what it really was...
    Damion is SO gonna get it.
    May 14th, 2010 at 05:45pm
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    EEEEEP!
    So, I love the update, but NOOOO Damion got in between them (technically) AGAIN! NO!
    Anyway, I loved the update, and now I'm like, dying to see what happens next.
    Until your next update!
    May 14th, 2010 at 12:34pm
  • sinsa-4-eva

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    Ha, funny that Leon is the only one who recognized her right away >.<
    I can't help but feel sorry for Dame, but... He needs to realize nothing's gonna happen between him and Raven. Nuthin.
    She's gonna have a hell of a time trying to find her way back... Update again soon?
    May 13th, 2010 at 09:17am
  • primum.non.nocere

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    I love the style of your writing, the characters and mostly, your plot! Keep it up. :)
    May 13th, 2010 at 05:48am
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    FABULOUS. Haha. Seriously.
    She IS coming back...she has to.
    And I don't like that Damion is between Hayden and Raven...but I don't want him to die! That's not cool. Soooo not cool.
    But I really did love the chapter, and I can't wait to see what else happens =3
    Is Stacy gonna get drunk again? haha.
    May 13th, 2010 at 02:09am
  • xWhenItRainsx

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    Amazing! I've been reading this story since you posted it on Quizilla and I still love it. :)
    May 12th, 2010 at 09:33pm
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    Oh, poopie. Is Dame gonna find her when he goes and gets his iPod?
    That seems like the thing that would happen.
    Oh, dear.
    Anyway, I love the story still, and cannot wait for more xP
    May 12th, 2010 at 12:29am
  • MicchiChan

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    I really love this! It's totally amazing! I love how unique the leading female character is! She's not Mary-Sue-ish at all, which is totally refreshing! I actually joined this site to read your stories and I can't wait for more. :D Keep up the awesome work!
    May 9th, 2010 at 05:29pm
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    I've been playing final fantasy X lately, too...haha. I have to 'cause my friend borrowed FFXII, but oh, well. haha.
    I loved the chapter, and like always --- I can't wait for more. It's addicting!
    (I think I'm addicted to Mibba, but whatever xP...it's a good addiction)
    May 8th, 2010 at 08:04pm
  • DyingRose

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    I love it!
    It's strange that I was playing Final Fantasy X right before reading this...
    Haha, UPDATE SOON!
    =]
    May 8th, 2010 at 07:31pm
  • Clarissa

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    I wonder what he got her, and what the plan is!!

    <3 Clarissa
    May 8th, 2010 at 08:36am
  • voidoids

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    Hehe, I'm waiting for a new chapter that I haven't read yet
    (since I'm as totally sneaky as a thief and read this on QZ).
    But I like rereading it here, still. :)
    May 8th, 2010 at 07:31am
  • Tiger!

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    One simple word: Epic.
    May 7th, 2010 at 04:59am
  • sinsa-4-eva

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    X] That was funny. I find it intriguing that he didn't recognize her, seeing as he's seen pictures of her when she had long hair and stuff in the past. Took him awhile >.<

    I love their bickering. Its fun.

    I'm wondering how he's going to get her back to the school... And what's gonna happen. Of course, that's the point huh? ;]

    Yeah, I'm tired, and kinda out of it. But I had to leave a comment anyhow. Amazing update =]
    More soon? <3
    May 6th, 2010 at 09:20am
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    Amazing!!!! Now, I kind of have to go 'cause my bus gets here in like, 5, but yeah. I had to read these before school or I woulda gone crazy.
    Amazing! Can't wait for more.
    Hayden x Raven...plz????
    May 5th, 2010 at 01:05pm
  • Clarissa

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    I looove this story!
    It's like none other story on here :]

    <3 Clarissa
    May 5th, 2010 at 07:39am