Of Thieves And Do Gooders - Comments

  • sinsa-4-eva

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    WHAT?! How is Hayden there????
    Not that it's not awesome... Just unexpected.
    More soon?
    May 5th, 2010 at 07:31am
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    Okay for the whole chapter I thought the son was going to be like that Derrick or Darrel guy who hates Raven but then when you said it was Hayden I like lept out of my chair and yelled yes with a classy fist pump in the air:)
    Thanks for the update:P
    May 5th, 2010 at 07:19am
  • Switchfan

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    I totally knew it was going to be Hayden. lol. I scrolled down to the bottom of the page just to gloat to myself if I was right or not. I was right! I CAN'T WAIT for the next chapter. Post soon please!

    By the way, you are an incredible writer. It's very refreshing to read this story when there are quite a lot of crappy one on Mibba. :)
    May 5th, 2010 at 07:06am
  • jessicastewart

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    OMG! how does his dad not know that his son is a serious thief and OMG! they better admit they love each other already
    May 5th, 2010 at 06:52am
  • Dimitri Doll

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    *squeeeeeel!!!!!!!!* I knew it was Hayden!! Yay!!!! I know I never commented before but I just started reading your story like two days ago and after this chapter I decided to comment. I really like your story I've never read a story like this its very enjoyable. Can't wait to read more!!
    May 5th, 2010 at 06:30am
  • katelynnjosee

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    Such a good update. I love how long they are. (: Can't wait to see what's next.!
    May 5th, 2010 at 05:55am
  • katelynnjosee

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    Dude, I love this story. It's seriously amazing. (:
    I wish I had an Irish accent too. =/
    May 5th, 2010 at 02:51am
  • farahxx

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    Ahhh!
    I love this story and I love how much you updatee!
    Hahahahah! (:
    May 4th, 2010 at 08:57pm
  • sinsa-4-eva

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    I love Irish accents XP
    Leon's sister seems pretty cool, and I love his mom =]

    well well, so the truth comes out. I wonder why Jack wants to 'teach' her... It seems odd... Oh well, update again soon?
    May 4th, 2010 at 07:26am
  • voidoids

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    Okay, since I'm a spoiler I went on your Quizilla account and read until chapter thirty three.
    Gah, I absolutely love Hayden and Raven. :)
    May 3rd, 2010 at 11:50pm
  • farahxx

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    this story is pretty amazing. you're a great writer. (:
    May 3rd, 2010 at 11:52am
  • Switchfan

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    Hayden and Raven have to get together. The end. Lol. I can't wait for the next chapter. Darling, would you be a doll and read one of my stories?
    May 3rd, 2010 at 07:45am
  • sinsa-4-eva

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    That Jack guy is... Creepy. I think he wants something from her, a... favor. He's probably bettig on the fact that she'll be back. Or sumfin.
    Poor Dame... Though he's totally fallen for the wrong person... I don't see him and Ray ever having a chance =P
    update again soon, please? She's gotta get back to school!
    Woah, never though I'd say that.
    May 2nd, 2010 at 10:17pm
  • sinsa-4-eva

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    =O
    No.
    Update, please!
    May 2nd, 2010 at 12:23pm
  • Switchfan

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    No! She can't leave! He has to go find her! And then she has to tell her secret so that she can actually like Hayden without Laura getting in the way. :D lol. I'm just blabbing. It'll be bloody awesome however you write it. I can't wait for the next chapter!
    May 2nd, 2010 at 08:57am
  • voidoids

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    The humour is so fucking awesome.
    "No, no, Ray, that’s the bow tie, it doesn’t go in your hair. Are you really this stupid when it comes to clothing, or are you just faking?"
    Bahaha, I literally fell off my seat when I read it....
    You are the most awesome person in the world. :)
    May 2nd, 2010 at 08:23am
  • MidnightConfession18

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    Like a total stalker, I followed you from quizilla. I really love your writing - witty, sarcastic and funny without trying to hard. And somehow you manage to make it romantic in a non-chickflick way. Love this story <3 and cant wait to read more!!
    May 2nd, 2010 at 06:03am
  • MicchiChan

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    This is soooo awesome! I love the humor, big time. I like how unique Raven's character is compared to the stereotypical lead female character. Keep up the good work, I can't wait to read it! :D
    May 2nd, 2010 at 12:42am
  • sinsa-4-eva

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    That was an awesome update =]
    I loved the before ball humor, and I gotta say, reading about the insufferable torture of the etiquette ball (well, it'd be insufferable to me) made me laugh.
    Fat lady porn!
    Update soon?
    May 1st, 2010 at 07:12pm
  • voidoids

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    I enjoy reading this, it has lots of good humour, and I'm in love and I've only read the first chapter. :)
    It's a great thing you update quickly! Hehe, you've got a subscriber!
    May 1st, 2010 at 11:59am