The Introvert's Guide to World Domination - Comments

Basically, everything that StickFigures just said sums up all I want to say. Your style of writing is just... bloody brilliant. I can't even wait for the next chapter and I am extremely excited for the upcoming events. Dude, you know how to leave cliffhangers. Update soon!

Jesus. Your writing skills are absolutely amazing. I mean, the dialogue between your characters is so inspirational and the way you set up the entire plot is so real-life it's kind of scary. I love love LOVExINFINITE this story. Valin is just plain amazing. I love how he is so mysterious yet caring and sometimes so freaking brave. And Rian...honestly I don't know what to make of him yet. I'm just sort of glad that Tania isn't pining away after him any more, I mean her love for him was a bit exaggerated since she'd never really talked to him. Tania...I can just relate to her, you know? I mean, I would probably be even whimper than her but I adore how she's realized that something has to be done and now she's taking action. I absolutely cannot wait to find out what happens in this story. You've captivated my attention from the get beginning with this story. I hope you update soon because you definitely left at a cliff hanger!
Can't wait :)

I'm ready to read the next chapter. I'm sure you'll write what you'll write for a reason.

I think you're an amazing writer - your command of the plot and dialogue is impeccable, and everything is so eloquent that I can't help but get caught up in the story. The symbolism is also very good - Valin, the person whom the government hides all its problems behind, and Rian, the determined, hardcore rebel. My personal favorite character is Cypher, since he's such a mix of serious and teasing, rebellious and a winging-it person.

One thing I have a slight problem with (I'm just trying to give some constructive criticism, so please don't be offended) is that I still don't really have a clear idea of who Tania is. I know what Valin (and even Cillian and Kennedy to a certain extent) would do in certain situations, but I don't for Tania. Her character is slightly ambiguous, and even though she's narrating it, I can't really relate to how she feels in certain scenes. But other than that, everything is near perfect. =)

Okay. I'm scared to read the next chapter. Oh well, I'm sure it wouldn't hurt. I need to find out what is happening in the story. Keep up the good work.

Who doesn't like comments?

love this story x infinite

ALSO! what do you mean it'll be hard to read? Gore? Madness? Violence?

Can't wait for the next one though I have a horrible feeling that Valin may die :( Really hope he doesn't...

OMG
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY.
PLEASE continue.
CANT WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER<333333

I'm usually too shy to comment, but this is one of my favorite stories on Mibba. And I'm liking it more and more with every update. :)

I commend you for being such a dedicated writer. Your story takes on a more personal, emotional look at totalitarian governments that does Orwell's 1984 or Huxley's Brave New World. It adds a much darker twist to the story given that the main character is completely lost as to how the government works. Is she going to find out about is as the story progresses?

:O
That snake! How could any person be so cruel?!
Oh gosh I hope Valin and Tania will be okay...
Maybe Rian will come and play superhero? *hopeful smile*
<3

i just read this all today and i'm FREAKING out over what's gonna happen to everyone and stufff.... ahhh please please update soon!

Wow. I feel like a bad person because I actually like the way that things are going now. This is going to be very interesting.

AHHH I've been away for easter and getting the emails telling me I had updates but not being able to read them was actually killing me! I LOVE THIS! It's absolutely amazing! You are amazing! You're stories are definitely the best on mibba! I honestly get really excited to see an update!!! It is truly awesome =D

I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. Please update again soon. (:
<3

I'm sort of in shock right now so it's going to be hard to write a decent comment. aa;sldkjfa;lkd could work, honestly, because that's what I'm thinking at the moment. Absolutely amazing would also do well, though. Anyway, I'm really looking forward to an update! This is honestly one of the best stories on Mibba, and you have loads of talent!

Pleaaasssee update! I love, adore this story :3

I meant to comment on the last one but I'm SUPREMELY busy with school and I guess I forgot :( Many apologies! I read it and loved it, as usual - as well as this one. I have a feeling I know what's coming...guess we'll find out. Keep up the good work!!!!!

OH. MY. GOD.

This was so intense Andy I almost wet my pajamas! Oh no, please don't say "rape" because I might just punch my screen and bleed all out. :P Dude, don't worry about comments. I don't get them much either, except from some faithful souls. Eh, what are you gonna do?

This story is amazing :)
The way you've written it makes the story really Intriguing.
It's the type of story I could just sit down and read for hours.
:D