You've Got This Silly Way of Keeping Me on the Edge of My Seat - Comments

Heehee, paint sex! I must now try it! Anerways, gushing aside, very much so adorable and sweet. And very well written boysmex. It takes my cake! *oooo, bad joke*

"Your green assprint is the hottest thing I've ever seen." Oh. Em. Gee. *dies laughing* XD

Two amazing updates. I loved them both.

More soon? :]

xoxox Adalia

aww i am loved :):D
one of the bested boysex chappie i've read
love it more please
UPDATES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey Lizzy.
=D
I'm sorry I haven't been commenting recently.
I just... I'll tell you when I comment you.
But I'm really, really sorry, and I hope you forgive me.
Thanks for the ded. It meant so much more to me than you thought it would, I'm telling you.
You, are amazing. At everything you do. Everything you write, and everything you will ever write, will only get better and will always be amazing.
ilyy, so much. That update was hot, it was beautiful. I mean, PAINT SEX.
You don't see that too often.
=DD
Your amazing. Thank you so much for writing. It means so much to your readers, me especially.

This is so amazing <3
I've been planning to write something like this and when I read this... You had written it exactly like I thought I should =)

Awesome update!

BRILLIANT.
Only you could come up with something as completely original and hot as that was.

More please. =]]
<3

u want 2 have paint sex w. us...? LoL hehe

um...

that was so FUNNY! hehe dirty...

yeah i was thinking, isn't he gonn get paint in his ass? woudl that burn? is it toxic? lol....

then they thought about it and i was like..duh! gosh....hehe

update?plz?thX!

That was hottt, and so cute :]
More soon!
<3

great boy sex

I love you too!

I want a Frankie ass print on my wall!

:lmfao

Ah, paint and boysex...two of my favourite things :tehe:

Oh I loved it!
I like how they had sex in the paint. It makes me want to go play in some paint....lol.
But I love, love, love the update! You're an amazing writer with grea talents.
More soon please?.


Oh and yay! I was on your list thing at the end of the chapter! Lol.

:O I feel unimportant!!!!!

*Humph*

woot WOOT!
I got deds...*pumps fists*
What WHAT?!
haha..
That was the kinkiest, dirtiest boysex Ive ever read..no pun intended.

im glad the tow of them are so happy! its odd, but i cant seem to come up with something for the future...Usually i make little predictions for stories...but with this one im totally oblivious! Haha..

Brendon's coming back, isn't he?

:crazy:

weee!!!! <33

oh my god.
i was one of those dedicated readers.
aww thank you.
you're so amazing=]

i loved the chapter.
the paint thing was so amazing.
i giggled a lot.
you're such a talented writer!<3

Aww.
I loved that :]
Haha, paint sex.
Very creative.
<3

WoW Amazing chapter!!

whoa, whoa, whoa! Frank was with Brendon for, was it 5 years? And never was on top? :o Brendon is such a jerk :x

awesome update though:D:D:D

Sexual Innuendo.:

PAINT SEX!
That's a totally new thing. Really original.
And hot.
There's generally not a lot of 'give' chapters , where the point of view is of the person on top , unless you know ...
I suppose it's easier to write as a taker , seeing as it's obviously better to relate to for women.
But you wrote that extremely well , and extremely sexily.

I agree with this post. :)

I know this was a "sex chapter," but I love the way you didn't forget the emotion or the fun. I completely get Frank worrying that it's too much, too soon, but I don't think it is. It's not really the beginning of their relationship. They're reconnecting and, even though it's not sufficient by itself, sex can help with that.

Gerard was still grinning down at me, practically eye-fucking me.

I love the term eye-fucking. It shall be added to my vocabulary. :P

I wanted him. I needed him. But... I wanted and needed all of him. Not just in a sexual way... but in every single way possible. We found each other again not even twenty-four hours ago, yet we were naked and about to have sex for the second time today. This seemed wrong...

It's not wrong, Frankie. Yes, you need to sit and have heart-to-heart talks. Yes, you need to talk through everything in both of your lives. But that doesn't mean you need to deny yourself the pleasure... the joy! of sharing your bodies as well.

"It's cold!" I exclaimed, jumping up. I was a little weary about getting that paint in certain parts of my anatomy, and Gerard caught on to this.

:lmfao at nervous!Frankie. (I think you meant 'wary,' rather than 'weary' -- no big deal.)

"It's beautiful," he corrected me,

Yay Gerard for seeing the beauty. He has the eyes of an artist as well as the hands.

I pushed him off of me, snapping my fingers at him, then to the floor.
"You. Floor. Now."

That is hot! I like Take-Charge!Frankie.

I'd never been on top before. I had no idea what I was doing.

Yay for first times with Gerard! *happy sigh*

I think this is really good for Frank, too. It lets the relationship be established as one between equals. I don't think Frank has ever had that before, has he? When he was first with Gerard, he was the younger one and just fell into the passive role. With Brandon, well, I don't think there was a chance Brandon would ever let Frank feel dominant even for a minute, was there. But it's all different now. Not only are he and Gerard meant to be together, but their relationship will be one of 'give' and 'take' where neither one dominates the other, but instead share everything. It's beautifully symbolic. :cute:

I began to panic, but then I looked at Gerard, who was sprawled out beautifully in front of me in all of his perfection... and it all fell in to place.

Of course it did. Because when something is right, it's right. Like you and Gerard.

"Frankie, keep going. I love you," he cut me off, smiling through his gritted teeth.

And I love this. It's not that Gerard is willing to put up with the pain because it will get better. It's that he's willing to suffer the pain because he loves Frank that much.

"Yes, Mikey, it's okay. Please, take your time.

Yes, please.

"Your green assprint is the hottest thing I've ever seen."

:lmfao

We stayed there like that for a good five minutes or so, sitting there on the floor and holding hands.

Still completely naked and covered in paint, too.

What a perfect ending. :D

Yummy paintsex!!
Haha. Reallly good.
I have a friend named
Alyssa. Haha. But that was
reallyyy good! I liked it!
MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE