You've Got This Silly Way of Keeping Me on the Edge of My Seat - Comments

  • Emma Unnie

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    Awwwwww that was a beautiful chapter.
    Hot but sweet at the same time.
    I don't know how you do it I really don't...you're just an amazing writer!!
    Nawwwww the dedications were so nice...& you put me in it?? I'm not that special!! lol
    Love you!!!
    :arms:
    February 29th, 2008 at 12:46pm
  • Sexual Innuendo.

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    PAINT SEX!
    That's a totally new thing. Really original.
    And hot.
    There's generally not a lot of 'give' chapters , where the point of view is of the person on top , unless you know ...
    I suppose it's easier to write as a taker , seeing as it's obviously better to relate to for women.
    But you wrote that extremely well , and extremely sexily.
    February 29th, 2008 at 12:34pm
  • Hopeless Heart

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    -new reader-

    This is so beautiful and amazing
    I love this so much In Love
    February 29th, 2008 at 12:32pm
  • XoX-loser-XoX

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    Nya!!! I love love love love love this!!!

    MOre soon please?????
    -subscribes-

    Btw, I only read the whole thing today...but...you got me like... WHOA
    February 29th, 2008 at 10:27am
  • RomanticChemicalette

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    OMFG. amazing....now i wanna have paintsex...LAWLZ!
    February 29th, 2008 at 10:12am
  • vichy

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    that was some seriously hot paint sex lizzie. I am glad you did it!!!
    I know you had your doubts, but damn that was good. Could you send me that piece of paper they fucked on?? As an early birthday present??

    grrr...loved it.
    February 29th, 2008 at 09:21am
  • crazy.beautiful

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    wow i've never had paint sex dedicated to me before....haha....

    but in all seriousness, that chapter was pure beauty. the intricate details and just the over all sense of overwhelming emotion that chapter held was beautiful. the love that gerard and frank have for each other spilled out ten-fold and then some in that chapter. i love how you can take such an intimate moment between two people and keep it just that, but add just the right amount of 'comic relief' to it too...you're an amazing writer!
    February 29th, 2008 at 09:21am
  • Husky

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    omg paint sex! hahaa awesome
    February 29th, 2008 at 09:06am
  • Tom Hiddleston

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    Well hot dayum!

    That was some freaky-ass paint sex! Haha.

    Great update. I look forward to the next :D
    February 29th, 2008 at 08:41am
  • FallenAngel101

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    love it more please
    it was good chappie :):D
    UPDATES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    February 28th, 2008 at 11:44pm
  • crazy.beautiful

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    i think i'd cry so much and drown my significant other with my tears if that ever happened to me, that was so beautiful and fluffy and, and, and i just loved it!

    i'm insanely jealous that you get to see mcr again...last time i saw them was at bamboozle last year......sniffle......anywho, i can't wait for more! you're talented and i love reading your stories!
    February 28th, 2008 at 06:49am
  • Dies Romantic

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    WTF does abercrombie smell like? yucky! hehe

    stetson black and cigarette smoke smell AMAZING together!!!!

    ok...

    um

    that was the best shit i've ever read...belive me...man...

    i lie alot...

    but that was some pretty amazing shit!

    update?
    February 28th, 2008 at 04:44am
  • Frank!enstein

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    Great update!
    "Fuck me babay!" Lol.
    I hope you have fun in April at there concert, I'm going to one in May and I'm overly exited about it.
    More soon?
    February 28th, 2008 at 04:01am
  • Sexual Innuendo.

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    Awwwwh.
    Fluff is amazing. <3
    I loved the description of the apartment.
    It was good , but not too much.
    Congrats on MCR by the way.
    More soon?
    February 28th, 2008 at 12:27am
  • Catastrophic Corie;;

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    Awwwww
    What a cute chapter!!
    BUt I sense a little
    Boysmex next chapter?!
    YAY!!
    MOREEEEEEEEEEEE

    [[PAGE CLAIM.]]

    I shall call him George.
    February 27th, 2008 at 11:45pm
  • Alice Verney

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    very fluffy but amazing at the same time
    February 27th, 2008 at 11:26pm
  • le bonheur

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    *Is extremely jealous of you*
    Gahh.
    Awesome update!
    February 27th, 2008 at 09:59pm
  • adora68

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    This is a comment on your Author's Note. Yes, it gets its own comment. Tongue

    New story, everyone!! It's a Frerard, and it's a ONESHOT!! My very first :):)
    It's called The Best I Ever Had.... Please read it. I'll love you forever, especially if you comment.


    I read. I loved. I commented. I'll hold you to your promise. Tongue

    Two, this chapter is dedicated to two amazing people: indulgence. and KranK. Those girls are truly talented, if you haven't read their stories yet, wtf are you waiting for? You'll thank me for it later. Seriously.

    Psh. I already read them. I try to read everybody who writes well. :P

    And third, I saved the best for last...
    ME AND MY BELOVED ARE GOING TO SEE MY CHEMICAL ROMANCE IN APRIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *screams and hugs Kayla to death*


    Ha! I get them first!! :lmfao

    March 30 & 31. (Yes, I'm going both nights.) Punk

    Vegas, baby! Kicking

    Come hang out with me. You know you want to... ;)
    February 27th, 2008 at 06:33pm
  • adora68

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    My apologies for the incredibly fluffy chapter. I love you all x's infinity.

    Never apologize for fluff! Drama and angst is good and thought-provoking and moves plots, but the fluff is what keeps me coming back for more! It makes me happy x infinity. In Love

    "Come on, sugar. Let's go home," he said excitedly. He picked me up bridal style, which made me burst into a fit of giggles as he led me down the hall to his our apartment.

    I picture Gerard carrying Frank across the threshhold of their home and I get the biggest, stupidest grin on my face! :cute:

    He smelled beautiful. He smelled like Heaven. He smelled like Gerard, just like I always remembered.

    Details. *happy sigh* Details like Gerard's smell just make your story seem so real. I really like the repetition it these sentences. It reads very nicely and gives me an idea of Frank's thought pattern at this time -- little disjointed bits of thought as he tries to take it all in.

    "We saved each other," I finished for him,

    Which is why they're so perfect for one another. All this time they've both been searching for something that made them feel like they felt when they were together, when the answer was that nothing else could make them feel that way. They had to find one another again. :hug:

    Two, I know you've seen your face in the mirror before. That Frankie, is the most beautiful thing in the entire world."

    :roll: That's the kind of comment that always makes me roll my eyes and scoff. My husband says crap like that just to get that reaction. :P

    "Because I can," I replied simply, earning a slap on the ass from him. It's nice to know I still had that effect on him.

    That part made me giggle. :lol:

    "I can't believe you have so many of us, Gee. I mean, you captured everything about us so perfectly..."

    Awwwwww! Cry

    And then you go from so sweet and tender to amazingly hot and sexy in just a couple short paragraphs. Wow. Sex on the studio floor. What an ending. Mmmmm... ;;P
    February 27th, 2008 at 06:32pm
  • romancee

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    amazing, amazing, amazing.
    once again.

    i'm inlove with this.
    and they're perfect together :]]]]

    yay oneshot. me likes ; )
    and i'm so happy for you to get to see the five beautiful boys.
    February 27th, 2008 at 05:18pm