A Single Pink Rose - Comments

I apologize for the... nine year hiatus, guys. I honestly lost my muse for this, and may, or may not even finish this.

awesome!!! updates rule! FINALLY, lol. (it's okay, most of us are busy anyway, so we dont have time to write our stuff either, haha) loved it :) write on!
~JynxRaven (Wings of Hope/Shadow Guardian)

P.S. ~i have an org 13 story, its sucks--but maybe you could check it out anyway? thankies

Woo! An UPDATE!! Party on!!!

Awesome. :) Kinda reminded me off another thing that I was reading, but on a different website. But that's only because it madde me laugh.

Might help for future referance? How To Annoy Organisation 13

soo much fun :) i love organization xiii XD before i had read this, i WAS gonna post my own organization story that i wrote elsewhere...but THIS blows me outta the water by a million miles. XD great job, it's not every day i can cay that about someone else's writing--just so ya' know. it's really epically awesome. has a few spelling errors--but nothing that can't be ignored (we all make mistakes) i swear, i need to improve my own organization story or it will never EVER compete~but maybe that's cuz i only know the organization from how my friend described it, seeing as how i've NEVER played a Kingdom Hearts game in my life. -_-' oh wells, either way, this was awesome XD and i haven't even finished reading it yet XD
write on!
~JynxRaven (The Wings of Hope)

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I like this, hope you continue to update =^]

o3o thank you~ -went to fix it-

Whoa. Lovely chapter. ::)

You used "a" instead of "an" at one point, but I'm much to lazy to go back and find the sentence. Also, something I noticed in other chapters is you tend to use "witch" instead of "which."

I like it..it's cool keeps me into it without having to go through boring stuff =) haha great job!!!

Ah; I'll try and keep a eye out for things like that lol xD Thanks for pointing it out O:

Yeah, that's what I was saying.

I plan on doing more. Not just ending it yet xD O: when chu say grammar things; like something I probably looked over? xD -had a bad habit of doing that-

More soon?

Either way, this story's pretty good. Minor grammar things, but nothing too, too serious.

So I accidently read chapter 2 before I read chapter 1. I fail. I know. ::)

aha xD I need to add in the prologue that I changed the point of view XD

Whoa. I got so confused for a second.

The prolouge was good. Intereting. Off to read chapter one.

Please tell me what you think... it'll be very appreciated... >o<;;;