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  • la dispute.

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    Awwee. I thought, at first, that Katie was Holden and Derek's daughter. Hahaa.
    I'm not gonna lie, I was sad that it wasn't all happily ever after, but I sort of
    loved that you made it this way - it was unexpected.
    I'm glad that she's happy and although she doubted it for a minute,
    is happy with Derek! I loved this story and I'm sad its over, Laska!
    But you know I'll be reading your new one! ;)
    February 28th, 2011 at 10:29am
  • Katie.Kit.Kat

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    I hate you so so so so so SO SO SO SO SOOOOOO much right now!! I teared up at the end... She didn't end up with John... I'm so choked upright now. Haha
    You did an awesome job writing this story... I loved reading it. I plan on reading more of your stories :)
    February 28th, 2011 at 07:20am
  • Multi Colored Ranger

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    That was so good! I really loved the ending a lot. <3
    February 28th, 2011 at 05:30am
  • liar's lane.

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    Can they please end up together? Haha
    February 27th, 2011 at 12:19pm
  • la dispute.

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    Hahaa. Halvo's nuts will be cut off if he makes me wait ten years! :P
    Awweee. It's about time Holden met a sweet, cute guy!
    As much as I would love to say I hope they work out, I don't.
    I'm still hoping that her and John will put aside their differences and give it a go. Lol. (:
    February 27th, 2011 at 06:40am
  • somebody_who_cares

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    Update :]
    February 27th, 2011 at 04:24am
  • la dispute.

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    Awe, poor Holden! But in all fairness, I think everyone has their fair share of the Walk of Shame at some point! Hahaa. But I still feel bad! And I think John's apologizing for being caught at the restaurant, but I could be wrong! Lol. I'm still loving this story, girl! give me more! (:
    February 26th, 2011 at 07:53am
  • Sincerely-Angela

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    why is john saying sorry
    February 23rd, 2011 at 05:48am
  • somebody_who_cares

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    :]
    February 22nd, 2011 at 07:48am
  • Grade.A.Catastrophe

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    update please :]]
    February 22nd, 2011 at 07:41am
  • Multi Colored Ranger

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    Great update. :):)
    I love this story so much<33
    February 22nd, 2011 at 05:25am
  • Sincerely-Angela

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    is it john? nooooo
    this story is great
    February 21st, 2011 at 04:34pm
  • bannafool

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    Wait was that John?
    Update soon please. Your story is amazing!
    January 22nd, 2011 at 06:59pm
  • somebody_who_cares

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    UPDATE! :D
    January 13th, 2011 at 06:10am
  • imXstillXfalling6

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    this story is really great so far
    January 7th, 2011 at 04:26am
  • la dispute.

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    Okay, the names of the pornos had me laughing SO HARD, Laska! :P
    I really didn't expect Holden to be serious when she said her and John should
    Make out, but shit, kudos to her! And damn Nick for walking in and ruining it! Lol.
    Dude, if someone really threw me a surprise birthday party, I would cry! Hahaa.
    But poor Holden! John is such a little dick. I ought to slap him in the face and
    Demand he apologize, but I won't. LOL. Can't wait for more, boo! :)
    January 5th, 2011 at 05:54am
  • drop dead vanity

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    Please tell me that was the ending was it?
    January 3rd, 2011 at 05:32am
  • Multi Colored Ranger

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    Oh snap. Please don't tell me that that was JOHN with that chick in the restaurant. :O uh ohhh.
    Please update soon:)
    January 2nd, 2011 at 06:03pm
  • liar's lane.

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    Nooooooo why!? :/
    January 2nd, 2011 at 08:35am
  • Multi Colored Ranger

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    Hahahaha, that was so funny. Oh John.
    Lovely update. :)
    Cannot wait for more<3
    December 23rd, 2010 at 03:53pm
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