Mess of Fading Lines - Comments

Aw, I absolutely loved that chapter! It was so well-written! :)
Good job!

P.S. Jacklyn's my name. ;)
Hahahah.

I had to laugh in the beginning when he called her a whore-bag.
Granted, it was mean, but I laughed. (:
I don't know why, but his "pricky-ness" makes me love John even more.
Maybe because I know that he doesn't really mean it? Like,
It's just a cover up for the fact that he likes her.
And geez. Jared went all crazy shit because Kennedy and his sister are hanging out.
Calm the fuck down, Jay Man! Hahaa.
And the whole faggot thing had me laughing!
I can't wait for more, love! (:

you know every time john starts to grow on me a little more he
has to act like a complete dick and ruin it all.
haha well i'm glad you remembered because i love this story.

haha, that was good :)

love this story!

a "perverted good samaritan" is such a funny concept. i guess if you really think about it, the two are entirely unrelated, but you'd expect someone who you could call a good samaritan to be pretty tasteful. :)

john's so silly. what did he really expect to come from asking a pretty girl on the side of the road for a blowjob? it's fun to see him like that, though. him fixing the car was also enjoyable imagery, just sayin' :D

i really liked this! update soon :D

This has really good potential
love it!

Lmao. Can I just tell you that I laughed so much during this chapter!
I loved that Garrett basically outed John, as to why he even went with
Them to the mall. And then when Holden licked his hand and kicked his shin,
I was rooting for her! Literally, I was like FUCK YEAH, HOLDEN!
Shiitt. Hahaa. I was expecting some joke about Dear John, being that John
Was there, but it didn't happen. Lol.
I had to laugh at John pulling the oldest trick in the book-
Laying his hand over her shoulder. John, you aint't slick! Hahaa.
Katie and Kennedy sucking face made me laugh.
I wonder how Jared's gonna take that.
This is amazing and I can't wait for more, love! (:

that was cute. i mean how she likes john and all even if he is a douche haha
i'm just curious on how old exactly jared's sister is.

i'm gonna like this story :)

I'm obsessed with this.
Haha, I hope that doesn't sound creepy.
But, this is so good!
:)

this is good :)
i definitely subbed.

Hahaa. I'd be such a grumpy ass if I woke up to my phone ringing obnoxiously, and I had a hangover. No joke! Lol. But I had to laugh when John looked her up and down; he's such a pervert - I sort've love it. Lmao. And I have to agree with Holden; John shows glimpses of being a normal, decent guy, and then with one comment, his asshole side shows. It's like two different Johns, I tell ya! Lol. Oh, and I genuinely laughed when he kept throwing his hands into the air to defend himself. And I can't wait to see how this shopping day goes. Lord knows it's probably going to be filled with rude remarks from John. Hahaa. (:

Lmao. Why, thank you for bringing me in! I love my little mouth-breather, even though he is awkward! And DUDE, you put in the American Spirit cigarettes! Hahaa. I so just rocked your world when I told you about those! Lmao. And awe! Jared got some lovin' for once! Dude, John was actually sort of sweet in this update! I mean, he didn't even try and take advantage of drunk Holden! I laughed out loud when she took off her shirt and didn't even care that John was standing there. Poor boy! And the ending, when he said 'I know' I was all aawweed! Hahaa. I can't wait for more, love! (:

"I could've sworn I heard the words 'I know' before I fell asleep"
This made me swoon.

Excellent update, excellent story.

Ah, I loved this! It was so good! (:
You write so well!
Oh, and for another character, my name's Jacklyn(:

I loved this! (:

Hahaa. Cheater update? I love you, Alaska! Lol. It was nice getting inside John's head, although we now know just how much of a prick he is. Although, he can't be too bad. I mean, he did pull over and help her with her car in the beginning. There's still some good left in him! We must save John before it's too late. Hahaa. Well, Holden must save him! Lol. Dude, John's just a man whore. I hate it, but I love it: I want Holden to change him, mayne! Hahaa. And yay for Lucy and Garrett! Getting engaged and whatnot! Lol. Okay, okay, I'm talking shit now, but it's just because I loved this update soooooo much! (:

"Fuck, fuck, fuckity fuck fuck," I sang to myself
I say that all the time, glad to know I'm not the only one who's thouht of this! aha

I am really enjoying this as well, for sure update soon! :D

If you need another character my name is Kathleen, but I go by Kat and Katie
That would be super coolio,aha (:

Haha John is still cute even when he's being a douche! Update soon!