Never Sent, Always Thought - Comments

whoaaa! im actually more amazed with this chapter then the one before it.
the whole climbing into his lap thing really shocked me.
i cant believe the poor kids that confused that even after he was raped hes acting like it was nothin.

nooo why did he get away with it?!
raaa!

oh this is so amazing! i just found it and read the whole thing....and subscribed.
i think its such a creative idea and im really looking forward to reading where this is going to go

Dude; I love this; please update soon? Pleeeeeease?

Love you my Pimp; and your Pimp Stick! <3

i knew he was going to prison but i didnt know why exactly

ethan has some things wrong with him...

yay! glad u'r back!!
i cant wait for more updates :)

:[
*sniffles sniffles*
poor poor logan...
i wuvv himm and hes getting hurtt and feels like he deserves it.
i guess, i can relate to him... not with the beating and crap.. but the whole "i deserve this pain they give me.." emotionally of course..
:[ *sniffles sniffles again*

noooooo
its almost as if he has stalkholm sydrome
but not...

It's a clichéd plot (then again, some clichés are clichés because they work), but I the fact that you present the story in letters is interesting. This is a new concept to me, I haven't read anything like it. I read the whole thing, and I like how you at first see how innocent the relationship with Ethan is. It really looks like a sweet and nice relationship, and it's really interesting reading how the cracks start to show, and how sweet boyfriend turns into abusive and controlling boyfriend. Nice job, I'll subscribe.

I LOVE THIS!!!
update soon please or i'll go mad for sure!!!

omg, I want more! Moremoremore! :(
Updates, pleeeeeeeease? :)

I really like it, but I want to slap some sense into Logan! D-:
There's a couple little key mistakes about every three chapters... That's a really good thing! Haha. :-)
Keep updating!

**PAGE CLAIM**

im obsessed :)

i like it!
but not ethan -_-
he can go.
but i feel so bad for logan!
moar soon? :D

not my type of story, but i like this. (:
i subscribed.

This is beautiful.
I really love the love you put into it, haha.
It's so unique and yet very interesting. <3

Brilliant!
Subscribed.<3

^What she said.

I have a collection of stories just like these and I can understand why they’re so special and important to you because in my collections I’ve written letters to people that have inspired me to be a better person and also to the ones I love dearly. So with that, I’m glad I’m going to be reading these, well as much as I can.

I like that you took this concept and made a story out of it, and I’m going to be honest, I think these stories are kind of overdone and cliché to a certain point, but like I said, I can’t wait to check this idea out.

The first chapter was beautifully written, your descriptions are mind blowing, and with the right type of music be listened to, this piece would be like watching fireworks for the first time. I love short pieces that deplore with emotions to no end. I can’t stress that fact enough. I think all writing should be like this, like someone said above me. Short, simple and sweet. My favorite line from this would be, “Your grin was infectious, and my hand slipped into yours without considering the possible outcomes.” — With this line you just showed us what love should be and feel like.

I feel as if these letters are a timeline of their relationships, and from these letters, I feel as if I was a witness between Ethan and Logan’s love, like “yeah I was there and that’s some lovey dovey type shit” and from a writer’s POV that’s important for readers to feel. These letters don’t tell much personally as romantically about Ethan and Logan, but the sensation is there. “Your hands slipped up to cup my face, and your lips pressed softly against mine.” — You describe affection so well, I’m jealous for not really feeling this type of love I’m reading

“I never knew I was addicted to you until we were connected forever by our hand.” — That’s the best line I’ve ever read in a story of this length. I noticed that from the first three chapters I read the beach plays a big part in this, I got that it was June, but I thought maybe the beach was like Ethan and Logan’s secret place where nothing else mattered in life — but their relationship. Even their names are a part of each other.

I stopped at chapter five because I feel what I’m saying is going to sound redundant after a while. So, I have to take back what I said about this story being cliché and whatnot, but I absolutely loved this. Ethan and Logan were to teenagers in love and that fact was very evident. Logan since he was the writing these letters was such a loveable character that – I don’t know made me smile whenever I got to the next letter. This was such a beautiful and well written piece.