Eden - Comments

We'll speak on MSN when you get back from Ohio tonight? I'll keep up to date on where you are with Twitter etc. The friend with the photographs!? Ohhhh, you'll probably know her from Tumblr if not then you should follower her.

The other half of him felt that horrid, bitter tear that split his heart and head in half. And through the tear poured a whelm of jealousy for what this man had with her.

I love that bit so much. Poor Valo. He's so cooped up and needs some lady lovin'. I like Hillie and Dante a lot.

Who's the friend? Yay photographs! You'll have to speak to me on msn soon, love. I'm in Ohio right now. Parents are packing up the hotel right now. I'm going to have to take a 6 hour drive soon. I just want you to know your new chapter is important so I fitted it quickly before I pack and leave. Hahaha. <3

Great update! :) Your writing's awesome

The only words for this story: it's simply fantastic.
It's so well written and has quite a different approach that most do not.
I love it and cannot wait for another update.
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<3

i LOVE this, i think you should start updating 2 at a time? that would be awesome :) and more often. sorry i just love it so much lol

oh gee. i don't like dante...i suppose you wanted it to be that way.
it kind of hurts my feelings that he treats her like that.

Within time! Good things come to those who wait my dear haha!

lovely update. Hill has to get away from Dante and get with Ville! They are so perfect for each other. :D

Can't wait for more and to see what artwork she come up with.

It's no problem love!

Thanks for the update ")

Love love love love love!!!!!!!

omfg the shit is going to hit the fan.
dante is an asshole.
i like that she's innocent and she falls more for his personality than his devilish good looks.

I adore HIllie.

CHLOE!!!!!

I like this bit:
He's really nice. He's one of those people you can walk away from and feel like you still haven't spoke about all you needed to? Just a really nice man" She sighed to herself and took a bite of her roll.

I absolutely love it so far. I rarely sit down and get absorbed in a fan-fic nowadays and this was so refreshing to read in a world where characters just fall into bed together.

I hope to see more of it soon.

I just started reading this story tonight and I have to say I love it. I am quite smitten with Ville and Hillie, they are cute together and help each other kill their loneliness.

I also love your writing style, the way you describe things, I can see them in my head so clearly and you pay a great attention to detail.

Can't wait to see where this story goes. :D

Haha! Oh dear God; I don't want to go to work now!

we'll make it up to you when you save me from David Cameron and his Tory party!

Oh, just saw that comment. SHERLANN TO THE RESCUE!!!!!

Oh I love Hillie and so far Valo's and her relationship is cute :) Nice and simple.
You have to update more! Fill in my free time, will you? Haha.

I better have my wee spot in this! -_- haha <3

I love this story! It's taken me a while to get back onto the Mibba train, but I've absolutely fallen in love with these characters. I literally just read all of the chapters in about twenty minutes.

I adore the fact that Hillie is a painter. Normally on Mibba we get either poets, musicians and siblings of Bam. So, I must admit that the idea of a painter is fabulous. Please update soon, I'm truly looking forward to the next chapter.

i like this story. however, i don't like dante, he's a bit fishy, i don't know about his motives. : ]