Eden - Comments

That is a conversation for MSN, just like 'WHO'S YOUR ANTICHRIST' is for MSN purposes. haha, thanks love.

I think only you could write Valo jacking off and make it sound so natural haha.
Even though it probably is natural for his sake. That man, oh that man, he probably wanks a lot. I would assume. Hm...ah that's something for MSN.

Ch'yeah girl that man is yankin' his cock! Dirty. lol.
See it didn't turn out bad. I quite enjoyed it. For some sick reason...I feel like I shouldn't be phased with glee by it. ANYWAY!

It's almost over? Seriously? Whoa. Well, part 2 then and then Sherlann comes in with a BANG! lol.
I'm excited. I adore this story for it's simplicity.

I felt like giving you a long comment cause I'm nice like that, I'm hyper again, AND I WUV YOU! Yep. Just so ya know. I like hyper me a lot better than sour me. Wonderful.

Anyway, update! YEAH!

A cliffhanger, really?

You're mean :(

Good writer, but mean none the less :P

Please update soon?

Awe...that was a cute chapter. I can't wait to see what happends next!

To some extent, plus it kind of needed to end there. S-s-sooo much more to c-c-comme

OMG THEY KISSED!
HOLY SHIT!
OMG!

lol. Aw.
But damn that was short. Writerrrrs block?

i love it. i'm quite addicted to it actaully and can't wait for the next chapter :)

Kassandra

Ville is so sweet! :')
I'm so happy this is headed in that direction....or at least, I hope it is.
Keep it up!

aww how sweet :) im late to the story

-gasp!- i got excited, as if the damn thing happened to me. then i was like, wait....
that's a sign of a good writer, you make me feel like i'm right there. it was totally intense.

Aww, I hope they get together soon.

This story is brilliant and beautifully written. Great job! I cant wait to see where youll take it!

Yesss, Bukowski. I flipped through my Love is a Dog from Hell after our conversation about this chapter. I can't stop falling in love with the gritty, lonely, loving, sexy poems.

Perfect poem for Valo.

You didn't turn it into a trashy romance novel, well done, love. Haha. I like the mini chapter. Yay, Valo to the rescue! Duh duh duh duuuuuh naaaaa.

him running outside was sweet, really. i like the way you do this, i mean i know, or at least i think i know, that they're going to end up together but Hillie is completely innocent about it, if that makes any sense.

p.s. - thanks for updating and plugging our story. <3

post another one! :) sooo good

Lovely new chapter.
You've got such an enjoyable style of writing.
I can't wait to read more. :)

yay! i love this so much, it makes my day everytime you update. seriously, i can't wait.
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Their eyes burned into one and other as the sun scorched their skin. He felt his lips tug into a smile and with his own tug of lips came hers. Hillie nibbled on her lip, feeling her cheeks redden.

Awwwwwwwwww!

Yay, you got the photos. I just googled the park. Holy shit, it is stunning!

Y-your writing Steph. It leaves me speechless. The raw emotion, the heart and soul - I love it!
Dante - you bastard!