oh my god I'm crying so freaking much, this is so beautifully written and sooooo emotional, daaamn... It's so hard to make me cry woth a story and you did it more than once with this one-shot.. I can't fucking wait to start reading the sequel. Seriously, I loved this. Best thing ever
god ! this was the most intense and emotional thing i've ever read.. i literaly cried when they were talking for the 2nd time.. she should have told him before the wed tho.. it's so heartbroken :( i think you should write that sequel, cause i think this story shouldn't end like this, they have to be together ! :)
Oh my God.. This is one of the best stories I've read in awhile. It flows wonderfully, and theres so much emotion in it that it honestly made me feel like crying! You're an amazing writer, keep it up and I do hope there is a sequel to this!
Man, she should have told him before the wedding. I think he loves her the way she loves him and doesn't realize it. I think you should explore that. hahaha
*blubbers* I need tissues. That was gorgeous. I want someone to look at me and tell me I'm their world... lord how stupid is he. You can't just tell someone that they're your world and you can't live without them and then marry someone else. *cries*
Oh. wow. That was truly beautiful. I'm in tears right now, probably the mood I'm in mixed with your amazing writing. I'd love to read a sequel to this (:
I`m in fucking tears right now.It`s just,as other people said,you illustred that feeling of loving someone when you know you can`t have him/her and that you have to give up your own hapiness to see them happy just freaking perfect,exactly how it feels.I`m crying like a fucking baby right now and i`m not an emotional person,but this just made me cry.I would love to read a sequel,if you choose to make one.