Letting Go - Comments

  • Kismet

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    Nooooo! This is so sad, Angel. Like, you conveyed feelings so, so, so well with this piece, but it makes my heart hurt worse than it already does. I just about cried 'cause he shouldn't be with this certain bride! He should be with her.

    I loved this. Although, I really don't know what to say as far as turning it into a story goes... I want to know what else is going to happen, but I don't want you stressed. I dunno. I loved this, I love you, and I just... I don't know. I is rather indecisive, as you know.

    Aaaaaaaaaand, I think this is one of your best one-shots. Everything is just written so beautifully.

    I think it should turn into a story, although I don't know if you want it to be long or short. Just go with your gut; you're great with this stuff! <3

    Also, let it be noted that I don't know why, but my mind just isn't working all that well at the moment. I hope this comment makes sense. Hahaha.
    May 22nd, 2010 at 10:02am
  • BriBriSexyTime

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    I don't know if I'm crying from this or supernatural but this was fucking amazing. make it into a story.
    May 14th, 2010 at 04:07am
  • Acid_Rain.

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    Awww..I love it! x)

    Make it into a story LOL
    May 10th, 2010 at 04:53am
  • spunkransomlover

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    I would love to read a sequel. =]
    May 10th, 2010 at 12:41am
  • Raging Glory

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    Oh sweet baby Jesus, I am in tears. This was absolutely amazing! I'm with everyone else, I demand a sequel :D
    May 8th, 2010 at 07:22pm
  • Freak Out

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    fucking hate you right now.

    i should have known when you wouldnt tell me if was happy or sad that it would be the latter.

    sequel

    im demanding it.
    May 8th, 2010 at 08:17am
  • atrocious

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    This was amazing Angel. Like, I'm seriously in tears right now. You captured everything so great, and I was on the edge of my seat wondering what was going to happen to the two of them. I really think this could turn into an incredible story.
    May 8th, 2010 at 07:51am
  • Angel of Vengeance

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    Damn, this was awesome. This would be an awesome story. You captured the emotions just right and I felt myself wanting to tear up because of it. I would so read the story if you turned it into one. I truly loved it because it was just beautiful, yet so sad at the same time. I loved it. You did an awesome job!!
    May 8th, 2010 at 07:22am
  • PinkMartini

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    Aw man. There's tear drops on my keyboard. Better wipe that off.
    Wow. So good. It;s got so much emotion in it and it was just plain brilliant. I loved it. Jeez. Keep writing please, that was so very amazing. :)
    May 8th, 2010 at 07:05am
  • The Dodger

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    I don't know if it's the timing of this, the mood I'm in, or how wonderfully you write, but I teared up reading this. It's probably a combination of all three, now that I think about it.
    That was beautiful. Really.
    I'm not sure how I feel about this becoming a story, just because I liked the "figure your own ending" vibe this left me with. But I would read the continuation if you chose to write it. :D
    May 8th, 2010 at 06:56am
  • fictionkitten

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    I absolutely... I don't even know what to say about this, I just... it's written so well, the emotion captured perfectly. It made me teary eyed, and I wanna see this turn into a story, very badly. Of course I know you're going to say I'm biased, but seriously I loved this without a doubt. You don't need to vote cause I am TELLING you to make it a story damn it. Haha. Okay so I'm rambling, but this one shot deserves praise it is amazing and you are one talented young lady. I wanna see more, please? I love this one shot, that's really all I have to say about it.
    May 8th, 2010 at 06:56am